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Published: 2012-12-27 00:58:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1710; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 12
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Creative title is creative. Ok, I took 3 days on this which is pretty much the longest I've taken ever because I'm impatient.So critique maybe. <3
Oh, uh, I got the spacey background from google. Didn't draw it.
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WElLELWELELELELWELELLLELELLELLLLL.
Looks like someone finally drew a thing! 8D
Okay well. This is kinda hard to critique.
For one, I don't believe I can say anything on the anatomy cause she's like...what I don't even. Hooman/durg? Yes? WHatever you did looks pretty good though. There's a few bumpy spots in the face lineart which I would avoid for SMOOOOTHNESS~ But it looks good!
The shading does a brilliant job of showing me the dimensions of her doggy-hooman face. You even did the darkness above the eyes, highlighted the nose bone, chin shadow, etc. etc. etc.
The hair looks pretty spiffy too. I suppose it would depend on the lighting for if it should be shinier or not, but next time you hair I would experiment with adding some shininess to it. Otherwise it looks pretty good. I like the upward curls in it. It looks pretty full and fluff-like, but you could probably do a tad more to make it even fuller. The hair overlapping her face is good.
The hood thing is good too. It's got folds where it should and yah.
But, I still must say it would have been really cool to see you make your own background for it. I'd like to see you practicing some night skies. I have a pretty cool tutorial or two for skies in my favorites. You should look at them c:
But then again I suppose you were going for space rather than a sky XD
But I'd like it better to see you draw it than sticking in a picture, no matter how lovely it came out.
The eyebrows look a little sharp. Whatever brush you used looks kinda thick and sharp to make eyebrows. I'd just use a small, thin and soft brush for those. Good curve on them though.
Some of the ear fluff looks a little round, and some doesn't. Try and make sure that's consistently the same most of the time. Pretty nice fur though.
I like the use of thin lineart on the glasses. But they look stick-on because I don't see anything going anywhere. BUT I actually see several reasons why you'd do that nevermind XD
Umm, I think you shaded with something...greenish? Dunno. It looks greenish. I would suggest a darker version of the background color. There's no green in the background, blue probably would have gone well. But then again she is a floating head.
Okay. Pretty much the last thing is that it looks like her teeth are sorta glowing almost XD I know it's a pretty small detail, but there's some pure white color that's all directly outside the outline of her teeth and it looks a little funny.
I suppose that's pretty much it though!
Nice job, Tany!
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thnak you yes
yea she got morphed with her doggy bec so shes mostly hooman but then also doge, and yea i could have been smoother with the lines teehee
thank
the shading is fun
it was really hard to make her face look smooth at all though omg
ohhh right i was gonna do more shiny stuff i forgot to go bacck frick
one day im gonna sew one a those hood things
and cosplay jade
with my brainwave ears <333
ahjhudjsknj i know i really should have but i was getting to the point of getting tired of lookin at the drawing haha
ooh yea thats a good idea
i always do eyebrows on the line layer i should change that
flfufuflfifll
canonically most of the characters have stickon glasses
and
i would have but she doesnt have human ears now
bc doge
hm yea youre right
i did green because thats her text color, and eye color, but next time ill find a background that matches better
they were supposed to
shiny teeth
so its good thats what they look like
than aknanksnkaknk i will use these tips when im drawing my next thing <33
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Okey.
Also okey.
Yeah, smoothness with shading is hard, but it looks good!
That's okey XD
Just remember to try it sometime
That would be cool 8D
Yeah, I guess that's understandable. I still would have liked to see it XD
Yeah. Make them floofier
Once I said that I noticed things like the dog ears making it impossible,
so nevermind XD
I see how green seemed fitting, then. But a corresponding background would be cool
I'd use a softer brush, though. Because it has the texture of the rest of her
face so it doesn't look like the teeth are glowing. Sorta, but it looks like there's just some kind of white light reflecting there.
You're welcome XD
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The buck teeth and fangs bother me. trying to imagine her with her mouth is open is all... BWAH
Not as in it bothers me art wise but as in try to imagine it...
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ew yeah I know
this art is old btw ive gotten better
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This is really pretty even though I dislike homestuck
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Wait, it's homestuck?!
I didn't know that ono
I know nothing of homestuck...
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If your on tumblr as much as I am, you know how to indentify homestuck and all of it's terribleness.
Its a nice artstyle and stuff
and this is a nice picture
but homestuck is ew
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I keep forgetting I even have a tumblr...
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;n;
Btw I have a question.
You up for continuing the rp tonight or no?
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I think we should just continue the rp tomorrow because I cannot think of something to type like seriously
im dying
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Ah
I'm bored as hell right now...
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ah true
tealeighs giving lessons through text of how to kiss o.o
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Oh my o.o
What is she saying??
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[8:54:39 PM] Hikari: XD
[8:55:08 PM] Hikari: You get to kisss that! A
[8:55:15 PM] Hikari: And make him harrrrddddd
[8:55:18 PM] Hikari:
[8:55:18 PM] Radium >U>: yeee
[8:55:20 PM] Radium >U>: ff
[8:55:29 PM] Radium >U>: I wonder when our first kiss will be like seriously
[8:55:30 PM] Radium >U>: kshfshgvdsfhg
[8:55:34 PM] Radium >U>: I've never kisssed anyone so
[8:55:35 PM] Radium >U>: sdfsr
[8:55:35 PM] Radium >U>: hg
[8:55:36 PM] Radium >U>: njkj
[8:55:37 PM] Radium >U>: o-o
[8:55:55 PM] Hikari: Dont have your first kiss at school
[8:56:06 PM] Radium >U>: :U
[8:56:08 PM] Hikari: Its less romantic
[8:56:12 PM] Radium >U>: True true
[8:56:26 PM] Hikari: Unless youre alone, in band hall or something.
[8:56:36 PM] Hikari: During SRT.
[8:56:36 PM] Radium >U>: Oh dude that would be
[8:56:38 PM] Hikari: XD
[8:56:40 PM] Radium >U>: eee
[8:56:52 PM] Radium >U>: that would be fantastic
[8:57:03 PM] Hikari: Also, first kiss, take it sloooow
[8:57:52 PM] Radium >U>: Well yeah
[8:57:58 PM] Radium >U>: Not like dominic who was all like
[8:58:10 PM] Radium >U>: SUPRISE KISS RIGHT ATER BIOLOGY IN A HALLWAY WHERE EVERYONE IS WATCHING
[8:58:37 PM] Hikari: When you move in for the kiss, lean in slow,
[8:59:07 PM] Radium >U>: E
[8:59:08 PM] Radium >U>: fdrgbtfr
[8:59:10 PM] Radium >U>: h
[8:59:11 PM] Radium >U>: h
[8:59:11 PM] Radium >U>: h
[8:59:11 PM] Radium >U>: h
[8:59:12 PM] Radium >U>: h
[8:59:13 PM] Radium >U>: o.o
[9:00:08 PM] Hikari: Make sure you hold onto something, keep you both steady, otherwise he might bob when you weave, thus hitting someones head
[9:01:27 PM] Hikari: Oooh, hold onto his shoulders.
[9:01:37 PM] Radium >U>: Thats what I was about to say
[9:01:38 PM] Radium >U>: oshdhsv
[9:01:46 PM] Hikari: Have him hold your waist/small of your back
[9:03:19 PM] Radium >U>: Hmmhm
[9:03:20 PM] Hikari: Hold eye contact until point of nose touching/intercepting boundries
[9:03:24 PM] Radium >U>: Like in movies yes?
[9:03:51 PM] Hikari: Yes :3
[9:03:54 PM] Radium >U>: yes
[9:04:21 PM] Hikari: When kissing, dont try to go all tongue so soon.
[9:04:45 PM] Hikari: You might not even like tongue, so dont try it until you are more comfortable kissing him.
[9:04:53 PM] Radium >U>: Well obviously
[9:05:02 PM] Radium >U>: Tongue just seems qeird.
[9:05:04 PM] Radium >U>: weird*
[9:05:09 PM] Hikari: But, if you feel the moment is right, gently part your lips when you kiss
[9:05:20 PM] Hikari: He will feel it and get the que,
[9:05:22 PM] Radium >U>: Oh god
[9:05:43 PM] Radium >U>: Well ohhkaay then :0
[9:05:49 PM] Hikari: His lips part, and lightly rub tongues together. You wouldnt think itd feel good, but youd be surprised
[9:06:29 PM] Radium >U>: Hm
[9:06:42 PM] Radium >U>: well alrighty then
[9:06:45 PM] Hikari: Also, if you two make out, keep in mind that his neck is pretty sensitive. I found this out by poking my pencil, and his reaction was... well. Yeah.
[9:06:48 PM] Radium >U>: Kissing lessons from tealeigh
[9:06:55 PM] Hikari: XD yes.
[9:07:14 PM] Radium >U>: XD
[9:07:26 PM] Hikari: When kissing the neck
[9:07:35 PM] Hikari: Always try to use a little tongue.
[9:07:38 PM] Radium >U>: o.o
[9:08:00 PM] Hikari: It causes reactions that can bring a man to his knees.
[9:08:05 PM] Hikari: >(inlove)
[9:08:14 PM] Radium >U>: :000
[9:08:17 PM] Hikari: >
[9:08:22 PM] Hikari: XD
[9:08:27 PM] Radium >U>: Scary fucked up faces
[9:08:29 PM] Radium >U>: o.o
[9:08:32 PM] Hikari: ]
[9:09:02 PM] Hikari: So, you know how to decorate cakes, right? Or at least youve seen it been done
[9:09:25 PM] Radium >U>: Yes, actually
[9:09:34 PM] Radium >U>: Those shows where they make giant cakes and stuff
[9:09:35 PM] Hikari: The piping bag touches the cake, does a swirl, goes back up, and repeats along the cake
[9:09:47 PM] Radium >U>: oh god
[9:09:54 PM] Radium >U>: I did not need that imagery,
[9:10:10 PM] Hikari: Do that. Your face is a piping bag, your tongue does a swirl, and you keep moving along the neck
[9:10:41 PM] Radium >U>: o///o
[9:10:48 PM] Hikari: Just dont suck on the skin. He will get a hicky, and his parents will see.
[9:10:55 PM] Radium >U>: cake is apprently a turnon
[9:11:02 PM] Radium >U>: mmkay
[9:11:06 PM] Hikari: XD it can be.
[9:11:39 PM] Radium >U>: XDD
[9:12:04 PM] Hikari: When you kiss him, though, pay attention!
[9:12:52 PM] Radium >U>:
[9:13:12 PM] Hikari: Any slightest pant, moan, or sigh could mean your doing a great job. Figure out what causes them most, and keep it up. Dont just nom on one side, though, go back and forth from each side, to his collar bone, and back to his lips.
[9:13:39 PM] Radium >U>: Your making my face blush D;
[9:14:04 PM] Hikari: Now, you two are kissing, your sitting in his lap, where are your hands?
[9:14:16 PM] Hikari: Im just teaching you, so you know what to do, silly
[9:14:25 PM] Radium >U>: Around his shoulders or waste
[9:15:07 PM] Hikari: Under his arms, if possible. Your fingers are lightly stroaking the back of his neck.
[9:15:33 PM] Radium >U>: Mmmkay
[9:15:46 PM] Hikari: Or, they are in his hair/back of his head. Playing with his hair is cute. Guys like it.
[9:16:10 PM] Hikari: And if you are touching the back of his neck, it adds to the blood flow
[9:16:17 PM] Radium >U>: :0
[9:17:05 PM] Hikari: Now, you two are both virgins, which is adorable, and he doesnt seem like the kind of guy to want to take it fast
[9:17:36 PM] Radium >U>: Well duh
[9:17:53 PM] Radium >U>: I don't take things fast either teal
[9:18:30 PM] Hikari: But, you. Youre a younger me. So far, youve been pretty much me, just when I was a freshman. So, lets say you two are making out, and he does his little pants and moans, his hands slip under the back of your shirt, and now hes just gliding them across the skin on your back
[9:19:02 PM] Hikari: If youre a lot like me, this will be very... Exciting.
[9:19:18 PM] Radium >U>: Well
[9:19:24 PM] Hikari: If its too much, just set boundries without actually saying "no"
[9:19:26 PM] Radium >U>: I think I'd shudder obviously
[9:19:41 PM] Radium >U>: I think he, knowing him, would wait for the right moment
[9:19:55 PM] Hikari: Pull his hands out, and place them back where they were, just over the shirt. :3
[9:20:01 PM] Hikari: He will get the idea.
[9:20:30 PM] Hikari: Men change when they are hard.
[9:20:43 PM] Hikari: They become animals.
[9:20:52 PM] Radium >U>: Oh my
[9:20:54 PM] Hikari: Unable to control themselves.
[9:21:21 PM] Hikari: The basic human function is to procreate. We are, by nature, supposed to have sex.
[9:21:50 PM] Radium >U>: True true
[9:21:52 PM] Hikari: Men, they have less self control in the bedroom.
[9:22:21 PM] Hikari: The most sensible man, when hard, could just be a horny dog.
[9:22:43 PM] Hikari: My ex for example. Wanted to wait until marriage, blah blah blah, ect ect
[9:22:43 PM] Radium >U>: That humps everything?
[9:22:59 PM] Hikari: Practically XD
[9:23:09 PM] Radium >U>: Well k then XD
[9:23:15 PM] Hikari: Anyway, we made out, and he was home alone with me,
[9:23:26 PM] Radium >U>: :0000
[9:23:35 PM] Hikari: And, well. He was sensible. But, he didnt have any self control.
[9:24:49 PM] Hikari: So, you never know. You get Nick hard, and he might be begging for you to let him... Ya know.
[9:26:34 PM] Radium >U>: Oh god :c
[9:26:47 PM] Hikari: Try to keep the rule of only do it when you are in love.
[9:26:47 PM] Radium >U>: Well chances are if hes turned on I am too o.o
[9:27:15 PM] Hikari: Yes, thats when you need to use your self control.
[9:27:44 PM] Radium >U>: Well I have a high amount of self control so
[9:28:03 PM] Hikari: Hey, I usually do too...
[9:28:20 PM] Hikari: Except, well... I lack it there as well as most men.
[9:28:39 PM] Radium >U>: Pffft
[9:29:21 PM] Hikari: Set boundries for yourself, good starting point :3
[9:29:32 PM] Radium >U>: :3
[9:30:00 PM] Hikari: Oh, and set boundries with him. Also, things like not shaving your legs is a good physical boundrie. Or wearing boring underwear
[9:30:44 PM] Hikari: Oh, and the fact that you dont have a condom is a great cock block. No contrception, no sex.
[9:31:05 PM] Hikari: Making out while on your period.
[9:31:18 PM] Hikari: Fun fact
[9:31:41 PM] Hikari: When on your period, you release twice as many pheromones, so males find you sexier during this time.
[9:31:52 PM] Radium >U>: :000
[9:31:57 PM] Hikari: It shows your fertile for babies.
[9:32:03 PM] Radium >U>: xD
[9:32:11 PM] Hikari: No joke XD
[9:32:38 PM] Radium >U>: Yaaay no jokes
[9:32:57 PM] Hikari: Also, if you and Nick make it far enough to want to lose it to each other, talk about it.
[9:33:19 PM] Hikari: When you start feeling ready, talk to him.
[9:33:37 PM] Hikari: Now, thats for the future, but its good advice.
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I was blushing as I read that.
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I've been blushing this entire time trust me
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Oh god. Code now is like "You could come to my house and we could do stuff 
Then code says,"But you have that damned ring -_-"
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H3Y UUU IM STEALN U TDAAYY
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I don't even... I hate him sometimes.
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There has to be a way
there needs to be away
I'm going to melt of boredom.
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Here are our options: 1 hour today or a sleepover this weekend or next week ;-;
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