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Published: 2007-01-22 07:02:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 5041; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 31
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Description This was a request made a while ago by . She wanted me to draw her character Pyro in this certain pose and outfit, which was from another drawing by an artist whose name I don't know...>.<

The original artist did an amazing job on the drawing and colouring, so it was hard to even get this close to it. I suck when it comes to choosing colours, so the colours I used are a lot brighter than the other picture's.

This picture, surprisingly, only took me about 80 minutes to draw, which is like a miracle for me. Plus, the inking came out a lot better than normal. But then the colouring...Ugh, I spent days colouring this, bit by bit, but it's finally done (thankfully).

Pyro (c)
Drawing (c) Me

DO NOT COPY OR STEAL ANY PART OF THIS PICTURE
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Comments: 182

girlyfun [2009-09-25 20:59:54 +0000 UTC]

i think you did really well with this! love the pose ^^

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IheartJV [2008-09-10 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Natalie... Your artwork is gorgeous and amazing. I've seen your photrealism at school and you are so talented with charcoal. I would love to see you put some of it up here because I just love it so much. This piece is really lovely and combines realism with a unique cartoon style that is all your own. The coloring is beautiful and realistic.

I would also like to point out that the law states that an image needs to be altered I believe 90% for it to be conisdered your own. People sit in that position.. you didn't plagarize anything because you made it your own. Plus you didn't take credit for it. but this has pretty much already been said.

So.. this really go out of hand lol. But from a fresh viewpoint of a person who hasn't been involved in this brawl, i think that both sides went a little crazy. But honestly, I think that the critique starting all of this was a little harsh and that maybe it could have worded a little bit more kindly.

Kiaki--chan can definately handle critique. She is a strong and confident artist who I admire. :-3

(and please don't yell at me I'm not against anyone)

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CosmicKalamari In reply to IheartJV [2008-09-10 03:47:34 +0000 UTC]

xD You're just too awesome. Thank you so much. And I've put up realistic stuff before, but it got almost no views. ^^' Plus, I don't really draw it...but if I ever do, I'll of courseput it up! :3

And thank you for backing up the argument. Yeah, Hope and I kinda just had fun with everything. xD It entertained us (dA flame wars are fun! )

You're such a sweetie.

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IheartJV In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-12 02:52:10 +0000 UTC]

hey, no problem!! You're very welcome. Oh.. i guess if it's in there i didn't look hard enough it should get more views they're beautiful! especially you're drawing of that dude witht the white hair...

yeha I'm definately on your side. I think that any critique should be tasteful and consious of the artist's feelings... you can be helpful without being a huge beeotch :-\

anytime!

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CosmicKalamari In reply to IheartJV [2008-09-14 22:32:01 +0000 UTC]

I know, and unfortunately, a lot of people don't see it that way. The only time I'm a bitch while critiquing is when someone does it to me first. Just so they know not to fuck with me. xD

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IheartJV In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-15 23:09:23 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. and that's understandable. I wish people could be more sensitive :-\

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Pircan [2008-09-09 02:28:06 +0000 UTC]

"one thing: I didn't put "Advanced Critique Encouraged" unlike your pal
But thank you anyway, despite I disagree with some of the statements.

I know you're just being a good friend to someone, I have nothing against you for that "

HAH nothing against a knife in a back. Reap what you fucking sew sweety. I was being polite and you even just prooved your imaturity. You ran straight to your little friends after me.

Well your doing more then critiquing and
BTW I don't think Gwen Stefani likes you using her Harujuku girls as avatars without permisson If you wanna talk about Copywright

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lionessJenna In reply to Pircan [2008-09-09 10:40:07 +0000 UTC]

no I didn't :/ I don't see anyone flaming you.

But now I know you are just as bad as your friend. All I can say is you can insult someone like me with such poor satirical skills. Anyway I guess I'll just keep responding, because this is funny.

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Pircan In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:09:36 +0000 UTC]

How was school today?!?! Who'd you eat lunch with? OMFG GIRL FRIEND don't you think that boy who sits in the third seat is TOTALLY FABULOUS! Girl omg Like how was that bitchy teachers class?!?! highschool's super! Would you Care for a skittle? You seem to have a case of the Dildo up my ass tuesdays!

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lionessJenna In reply to Pircan [2008-09-09 20:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Ah fuck, I can't believe you've done this.

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lionessJenna [2008-09-08 16:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Considering you asked for Advanced Critique I'm gonna critique it.

Anatomy: I'm sorry but this is really bad anatomy wise. Hands are drawn incorrectly and the head is lopsided, also her vagina is too low if you can't see it through that hole in the weird underwear. Her arms appears too short and the pose is clumbsy and unnatural.

Colouring: The skin tones used are nice, but the rest of the colouring is a mess, I can't even make a wild guess what her clothes are made out off, appart form the magical dodge and burn leather top The metal looks flat when the outline suggests it's a 3D object sayying to me you couldn't be bothered with the shading much at all.

Background: none

Overall: Artist needs to work on their anatomy and put more time into the colouring, and a background or objects for the character to interact with would be a nice thing for the artist to try.

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 02:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Have you even seen the original? 'Cuz it's based off that, y'know. Hence why it's so crazy and strange in places.

And BTW, it's not Dodge & Burn, I use Highlight/Darken!

Straight up!

Yo!

Fo SHIZZLE!!! >:3

BTW, if you'll notice, this picture's close to two years old, so honestly, your critique/insults/flaming towards this picture don't mean shit to me.

:3

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lionessJenna In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 10:33:14 +0000 UTC]

can you not take a critique even when you ask for one? :C
Highlight and darken is the same as the dodge and burn when it comes down to the cheapness of the tool, try using your own colours to shade.

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 16:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, trust me, I do. I just wasn't sure exactly how to get a similar effect to the original. If you look at my other pictures you'll see that. And the highlight/darken is the same, except the h/d is a less dramatic effect.
And I'm just pretty much trying to keep this argument going. We had a pretty good thing and now it seems like it's dying down a bit.

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lionessJenna In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 17:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Can you link me the original so I can see what you are talking about?
If you wanted this sort of drama you should of lashed out at someone on your own, getting your friend to do it is not cool, it just makes you look like a wimp. The general public will nearly always side with the person you're starting a fight with if you are the one who is going as a group agaisnt one person, with no reason other than you didn't like what they said about your artwork.

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't lash out at people for no reason. And as I've said a hundred times before, I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE ORIGINAL IS, OTHERWISE I WOULD HAVE LINKED IT IN THE DESCRIPTION! >.<
And I didn't send anyone out to bitch anyone out or anything, people just kinda di it on their own. I actually just came back on dA because Itazura told me people were saying shit on my picture. I just kinda joined in. And it wasn't exactly a group of us against one person, more like two people against your group. Get the story straight.

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lionessJenna In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 20:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah fuck, I can't believe you've done this.

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-10 02:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Wut?!? o.0?

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:13:18 +0000 UTC]

// Can you link me the original so I can see what you are talking about? //

I think she's made it clear she no longer has the image. Maybe you should ask Oni-ramen for since they "supposedly" have it on their computer. [[ yet have failed to give the artist the link after she asked for it multiple times so she could put it in the description, along with the other credit. ]]

///If you wanted this sort of drama you should of lashed out at someone on your own, getting your friend to do it is not cool, it just makes you look like a wimp.///

Rofl. She didn't even know about this comment. I saw it the other day when going through her gallary. I was the one who informed her about it.


//The general public will nearly always side with the person you're starting a fight with if you are the one who is going as a group agaisnt one person, with no reason other than you didn't like what they said about your artwork.//

Actually, the general public is honestly just going LOL.

Especially since all this was started over some idiotic comment left by some friggin moron who didn't read a picture description.

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Pircan In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-10 02:14:21 +0000 UTC]

No i'm pretty sure the general public sides with the person who's got Talent. XD

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lionessJenna In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-09 20:30:25 +0000 UTC]

They are going "LOL" at you for being a twat.

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Pircan In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-10 02:14:49 +0000 UTC]

OH NO HARASSMENT i'm reporting that.! Twat is a berry berry bad word. Thats a Five Below No girl

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lionessJenna In reply to Pircan [2008-09-10 16:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Twat is like sayying Hat, 'cept with less H

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Pircan In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-11 02:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Cunt rhymes with Punt. ((not calling you that, just noticed that.))

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lionessJenna In reply to Pircan [2008-09-11 17:07:28 +0000 UTC]

so many noticable things in the world we can over look.

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Pircan In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-13 00:09:59 +0000 UTC]

*nods* agreed

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:32:44 +0000 UTC]



If I'm a twat then you're my douche bag.

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lionessJenna In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-09 20:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah fuck, I can't believe you've done this.

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:38:57 +0000 UTC]

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lionessJenna In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-09 20:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I can't be arsed typing out long comments anymore, it was funny at first, but FGSFDS.
I need to find drama somewhere else, you guys are hogging my time

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oni-ramen-fox In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-08 20:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Let's make babies

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Pircan In reply to oni-ramen-fox [2008-09-09 03:43:33 +0000 UTC]

[link]

No one wants to make babies with that.

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lionessJenna In reply to Pircan [2008-09-09 10:34:36 +0000 UTC]

omg yor so funny. I'm surprised you and your BFF haven't been reported for harrassment by her, but dont bother hiding the evidence, it's all screen cap'd

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 20:16:13 +0000 UTC]

ONOES D:! BUT THEN WE WOULDN'T GET TO CONTINUE THIS AWESOME ARGUMENT!

[[ and you wouldn't have to worry about screen caping, dA can get to hidden comments easily. ]]

Also, if we were reported for harassment, you guys would all go down for it too.

:\

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lionessJenna In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-09 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah fuck, I can't believe you've done this.

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CosmicKalamari In reply to Pircan [2008-09-09 04:07:47 +0000 UTC]

xDD Oh God!

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Pircan In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 20:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Hey Kiaki and Butterfly I think we should go out for some S-bucks to celebrate this war. Its pretty sweet I GAVE UP HEAD FOR THIS! 8D

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CosmicKalamari In reply to Pircan [2008-09-10 02:23:29 +0000 UTC]

xD OMG, I've already said this once today, but I THINK THAT'S THE SWEETEST THING ANYONE HAS EVER SAID TO ME!!! (It about ties with the other comment I said it to. :3)

OMG SPEAKING OF STARBUCKS I WENT TO BARNES AND NOBLE TODAY AND GOT THEIR LAST COPY OF THE BURST ANGEL MANGA!!! IN ENGLISH!!! EPIC WIN!!!

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Pircan In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-10 02:33:23 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to Pircan [2008-09-09 04:06:13 +0000 UTC]

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Pircan In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-09 20:20:19 +0000 UTC]

lol WTF?

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ItazuraButterfly In reply to oni-ramen-fox [2008-09-08 20:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Instant down syndrome.

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lionessJenna In reply to ItazuraButterfly [2008-09-08 21:09:26 +0000 UTC]

cool

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 02:35:28 +0000 UTC]

I find your siggy strangely ironic. :3

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lionessJenna In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 11:18:24 +0000 UTC]

as you should

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CosmicKalamari In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-09 16:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Was that suppossed to burn me? Because it honestly didn't.

PHAIL.

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lionessJenna In reply to CosmicKalamari [2008-09-09 16:54:11 +0000 UTC]

PHISH.

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lionessJenna In reply to oni-ramen-fox [2008-09-08 20:39:04 +0000 UTC]

lol she got one of her friends to try and " critique " one of my pictures, I'm laughing my ass off, it's so sad XDDDDD

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oni-ramen-fox In reply to lionessJenna [2008-09-08 21:03:11 +0000 UTC]

oh god, which picture? Linnkk

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lionessJenna In reply to oni-ramen-fox [2008-09-08 21:07:54 +0000 UTC]

[link] lol

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