Comments: 19
Corrupthoughts [2009-01-23 01:09:23 +0000 UTC]
haha! i really like the end of this... its got a tone throughout I think all girls can relate too.
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katiebird400 [2009-01-03 03:42:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow I REALLY love this. It is so true about many people I know.
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FalloutFox [2008-12-31 05:17:53 +0000 UTC]
hehe, didnt know you were a good girl
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GeezUp [2008-12-31 04:48:52 +0000 UTC]
Nah but honestly its a good poem it really put me there and definitely reminded me of a few scenarios. good job expressing it....
Oh i think the tattoo line offsets the poem a little.. overall good tho..
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CrashArtist In reply to GeezUp [2008-12-31 04:53:34 +0000 UTC]
I was looking at that as well...hmmm
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dreamingINmonotones [2008-12-31 04:23:22 +0000 UTC]
haha, i LOVE this.
i think it's brilliant,
especially the end x]
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