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CrazyPurplePuppy — x Held Close x

Published: 2007-09-29 02:06:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1966; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 34
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Description More scene cuts I thought up randomly and felt like writing~!

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Night perked his ears curious, flickering behind him where various shouting was. Turning and peeking through the bushes like many others apparently had taken seat for the show out of sight, curious of the spat between the two peaceful unicorns of Night and Day.

“I can‘t believe what I‘m hearing Luna! It can‘t be true, it isn‘t! I won‘t believe it!” Solar, the golden unicorn that represented the day in it’s golden glory stood tall at least seven feet, horn not included. He looked furious as he scorned the smaller, more slender female Unicorn. Luna lowered her head to her shoulders flinching at his voice raising her hands to her chest as if to protect herself from spiteful words, “Solar.. I.. Well.. What everyone is saying…---” “Are absolute lies! Tell so Luna, I need to hear it from YOU!” He demanded.

Night scowled pushing away at the bushes into the clearing where the stood, Luna looked up wide eyed shaking her hear, eyes pleading for him to stay back. Night didn’t listen as he took a stance, medium height between the silver and gold unicorn. “I demand you stop talking to her like that.” He said in a cool demeanor, looking to the golden through slanted eyes.

Solar turned and glared to see the white winged panther, “You! You‘re the cause of all this, don‘t you tell me how to speak to her. You‘re the one spreading all these awful demeaning rumors about her and you!” Solar snarled. Night opened his mouth but caught a glance of Luna behind him making shushing motions to keep quiet. Night looked confused, didn’t she want to tell him the truth? Was she actually lying about what they had done?

Luna looked in shambles with glossy, teary eyes. Ashamed of her actions with her ears flat to her head and tail dragging against the ground. Night bit his tongue, fine, if that was what she wanted… Night gripped his first turning from the two of them, “I‘m sorry… I didn‘t mean to start such a ruckus…” He said in a cold tone, taking a step or two back towards the bush where he had entered from.

Luna looked up to see him turn and walk. She opened her mouth but nothing came, only tears falling down her face. She gasped for breath attempting to rid the knot in her throat. What in the world had she done. “Good riddance!” Solar had shouted still looking frustrated over the matter sure to watch him leave.

But just before Night had entered through the thickets she closed her eyes tight and gripped her hands to small shaking firsts, “IT‘S ALL TRUE!” She shouted at them and all the others that had casually hid themselves.

Solar and Night had stopped dead in their tracks, Night’s ears perked and he glanced over his shoulder to her and Solar. Solar though stood motionless, speechless even. Finally he turned to look at her, as she opened her crystal clear blue eyes, shimmering with tears looking up at him, “It‘s all true Solar.. I‘m sorry.. I just.. I.. It‘s not his fault, I came on to him…”

Solar closed his mouth and grit his teeth, parting his lips and talking through, “…Why?” His voice seemed shaken, his eyes hurt. “Why Luna…” He repeated softly.

She swallowed hard, “Be.. Because Solar! You would never touch me, never kiss me, never show more then affection. Don‘t you think I need more then that? You asked me to be y.. yours.. I thought you wanted me.. All of me.” she said through shaking breaths, “Because you.. You wouldn‘t give me that attention I.. I looked for it else where. And He, Night, He was there for me when you.. You weren‘t.”

Solar’s ears and tail drooped, his heart sinking, churning with a sickening feeling, “Luna.. I.. I was just trying..” He closed his eyes letting his head lower shaking it.

Luna blinked through tears, “I.. I know but I just.. I couldn‘t control myself, but I still want to be with you Solar, I‘m so sorry.. I didn‘t mean for it to be like this.. I---”

Solar raised his head, his radiant eyes had now dimmed and almost grayed. He merely shook his head cutting her off, he turned from her as she teased biting her lip, “Solar.. No.. please..” He didn’t look again, he turned away from them both walking into the thickets, disappearing from sight.

Luna trembled, her knees buckling beneath her as she fell onto her legs and hands, lowering her head and releasing a shaking sob. Night cast his ears back, concern clutching his being as he slowly approached her, kneeling down and taking her into his arms bringing her close, holding the delicate shoulders that shook with every heart wrenching sob. She leaned into him, not caring for the moment just glad for something there as she clung to him allowing herself to releasing the pain that clawed it’s way out of her very being…

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Story in a nutshell, she, the silver unicorn, loves the Gold Unicorn, Solar, her perfect match. Didn't get enough attention, screws other guy, white panther, gold unicorn boyfriend finds out about cheating, drama! :0

What will happen next?

Lights, camera, Heartbreak!

Luna, Solar, Story [c] Me
Nightmare [c]
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Comments: 11

scm11240464 [2009-10-18 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

skillz. you have them.

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RagingDragon [2007-09-29 04:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work. ^_^

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CrazyPurplePuppy In reply to RagingDragon [2007-09-29 04:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankya! X3

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RagingDragon In reply to CrazyPurplePuppy [2007-09-29 04:38:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^_^

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mberchrome [2007-09-29 02:17:24 +0000 UTC]

:'D all around, freaking awesome <3 your lineart makes me happy~

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CrazyPurplePuppy In reply to mberchrome [2007-09-29 03:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Whee! Thank you! <3

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BlurrZ94 [2007-09-29 02:08:13 +0000 UTC]

SO NICE!!!

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CrazyPurplePuppy In reply to BlurrZ94 [2007-09-29 02:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BlurrZ94 In reply to CrazyPurplePuppy [2007-09-29 02:32:29 +0000 UTC]

welcome...

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Yukina-Shrine [2007-09-29 02:07:49 +0000 UTC]

; w ; That is so adorable! I love the way you drew it~ <3

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CrazyPurplePuppy In reply to Yukina-Shrine [2007-09-29 02:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks so much~<3!!!

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