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Published: 2007-04-25 08:22:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 6666; Favourites: 245; Downloads: 59
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all critique much appreciated, especially on the folds. :/Related content
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makes me think of the Tsubasa Chrionicles time witch.
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I like your style. It reminds me of the works of Leiji (Reiji) Matsumoto. The outfit is beautiful the folds give the dress a sort of abstract look. I'm loving it!
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Very gorgeous and elegant. I love her outfit and the simplistic style!
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I like the lace you did on the picture. I also like the smoothness of the lines as well.
The top of the ears should line with the eyes, while the bottom part of the ears line up with the base of the nose. I find the chin a bit sharp, make the narrowing the chin a little more gradual for a fuller face. Her upper should be thicker and it tapers a litte as it reaches the elbow. For the folds, maybe you could use fewer, longer flowing highlights.
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is it xxxholic,(or whatever you call it)?
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she reminds me of Yuko from XXX-Holic, very pretty.
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ok. the frame of the face is a little mushed, the hands are very well done, the arms seem to be a bit To long at the top compared to the lower half. the pose is natural, and i like the contrast of the red string, seem slike a reminder.
overall rating: 7/10
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I like her expression....
she looks somewhat like Yuko from xxxHolic....
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interesting...i love the way you did her hair, she is very interesting while at the same time nonchalant...its the expression on the face. i love it
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An absolutely gorgeous drawing, I really love the style! I love the sly expression.
The only critique I could possibly have is a graphic design one and that would be if you are going to have that text make it small and in the bottom-right to get it out of the way. It attracts too much attention and your work deserves it.
Definitely favourite!
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I really like the color scheme used, as well as her expression.
The folds came out well too.
Very nice work.
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The left arm seems a bit skinny, but that's in the style so I don't really have a complaint about it. I think what makes it seems a bit on the strange side is that it seems to bend or curve slightly.
Actually, I love this piece, and especially the soft colors.
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Good job on the DD.
I dislike the sharpness of her chin, it makes her almost look like she has an eating disorder.
Other than that, I think you did a great job!
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I think you should make the folds less random and thin and more defiant and solid. Perhaps use a subtle color gradient for the fold areas as well?
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The figure might look a little more elegant if you removed the shadow under her arm, and some of the highlights on the left side of the skirt. There's something not quite right about them, and the drawing would be a little cleaner.
But overall, it's a wonderful piece. I especially love the hair. Was it inspired by xxxHolic, by any chance?
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The colors are great!
The only mean thing I'd have to say is this: the folds look... hm. It looks more like light is soming in through a patterned window rather than the dress having folds that catch different amounts of light. I'd suggest reducing the horizontal lines on the shading a bit.
Live models wearing dresses can help you, I'm sure. 
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the style makes me smile - it's cute and inviting in a mischevious way. good stuff
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lol, she kinda reminds me of Yumi from xxxHolic. great job. ;o
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scratch that, yuko-san. haven't read it in a while. X.X
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Wow, she's so pretty! I love her hair and her dress~ Congrats on getting a DD~ -D
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I like this picture^^
This woman is Yuuko? xxxHolic manga?
Sorry my english is very bad
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Great work. There isn't a thing I don't like about it.
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She's incredibely beautiful. I love her hair and her eyes...
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This looks great!
Hair's fantastic, and so are the hands (they look very elegant), and the outfit. The only problem I have with it is the shape of the face. It just doesn't look...right.
Still, over all, it's wonderful!
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Very nice. It seems very flat, but I like it as a 2d sort of design. Keep it up.
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very nice. I like the style. Especially the contrast between the grey and the black.
However, I think a different colour for the background would've suited better than the muted orange. It's too warm, I think.
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I'm glad I wasn't the only one who thought this was Yuuko-san.
Was this modeled after the manga xxxHolic?
Very simple, but very lovely portrayal, regardless of who it's of :] I love the little details.
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I found it thanks to the DD and yeah that IS great 
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The folds yes. . . could be worked on. . . maybe if they werent so sharply done. . . blended in with the dress more. . . it would look better.. i dono.. you can try.. but other wise its great!.. keep up the good work ~crossyourheart... 
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I love how you have color it, but the hands looks a bit funny O.o' But it's okay, hands ARE tricky to draw >_<' .___.;
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I really like it. It has a nice vector and simple beauty to it.
Gratz on the DD
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I think it's great work. It's cartoony so the drawing style on the body and such is up to your interpretation. The folds in the dress, and the position of the left hand are kind of awkward. Just work on your shading. As far as the hand.....it just seems like an unnatural pose. Maybe if it was flush with her cheek, grasping something or clutching her knee. I'm not sure. Keep up the good work.
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looks good to me...really like the victorian look for her.
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Wow! I saw your DD and come to your gallery to enjoy jour work, it is so beautiful, I want you on my favs
See U!!!
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Im not too much an expert on folds or anything...but she has the most cheeky expression! The little hints of colour are also very well done. Love it!
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Hmmm... I think the folds are too angular, like... They should be affected by gravity more, and have more of a downward pull on some of them, especially the ones toward the very left.
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