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CrystalPudding — Oliver's Confession Attempt

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Published: 2019-01-02 00:54:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2417; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Description **In the school hallway - Lunch break**
Oliver: *nervous* I-I don't know, Iro-chan... Confessing to Rin-chan to her face is a little...
Iroha: *pushing him* You're not confessing to her face, you have your love written down already. We're just going to DELIVER it, Oliver.
Oliver: I-it's practically the same thing as doing it to her face!
Iroha: Calm down, let's just peek in her classroom, okay? We're not traveling all the way to the 3rd years' hallway to do NOTHING.
3rd-year student: Nekomura-chan!
Oliver: EEK- *freezes up*
Iroha: Ah... Ka-Karu-senpai, good afternoon.
Oliver: *brings his hat down to cover his eye* G-g-good afternoon...
3rd-year student: Are you going to attend the club meeting tomorrow?
Iroha: I'll do my best to! I'm sorry, my classmate and I are in a hurry-
3rd-year student: Oh, I wanted to compliment that envelope he's holding. It's really cute and it looks like a really sweet love letter.
Oliver: H-huh?!?! *freezes up more*
3rd-year student: I won't take much more of your time, though. Be sure to attend the meeting! See you later Nekomura-chan!
Iroha: *waves goodbye* S-see you... *turns to push Oliver more* Now's not the time to be embarrassed! We gotta move!

**In front of Rin and Nana's class door**
Iroha: There she is... Oh- lucky! She's standing near Nana's desk, closer to the door than usual! Although Luo-senpai and Kagamine-senpai seem to be visiting...
Oliver: *looking at his love letter envelope in deep thought* Iro-chan... I don't know if I can-
Iroha: Of course you can! Just walk in there and say *imitating Oliver* "Rin-senpai... C-c-can I speak to you for a bit?" and then she'll walk to the door and then you give her the letter- I don't care what you do after that. You can run out the window for all I know- as long as the letter is in her pretty fingers, we completed the mission!
Oliver: I... I can't...! That's way too bold!
Iroha: You got any other ideas on how to give it to her?
Oliver: ... *starts opening the envelope*
Iroha: Wah- hey, the seal-!
Oliver: ... Trust me, I'm going to deliver it...
Iroha: ???

**In the classroom**
Nana: Piko-nii then picked her up and set her on my bed. It was cute to see him panic after finding out she hurt herself.
Len: How nice.
Tianyi: That's really sweet of him. It's good that even though you all are from different companies he still treats you all like his sisters.
Nana: That reminds me- Rinny, don't forget to visit the student council room later.
Rin: Ah- I almost forgot...! Thank you, Nana~n...!
Tianyi: Did you leave something in there?
Rin: N-no, I needed to talk to the vice president about the upcoming joint schools' sports festival.
Tianyi: Oh, I'll come with you! I actually had some questions about it too.
Rin: Sh-should we go now?
Tianyi: Yeah, the sooner the better! Let's-
*paper airplane zooms in between them*
Len: *gets hit in the forehead by it* ACK-?!
Nana: *in awe* Heeeeh... That was cool... It went straight to the forehead.
Rin: Le-Le-Le-Len-kun?! A-a-are you okay?!
Tianyi: That flew by really fast...
Nana: It looks like a love letter... What a strange way to give it to him.
Len: Agh... *holding the letter in one hand and rubbing his forehead with the other* These girls...! Their love confessions are slowly getting deadlier every day...!

**In front of Rin and Nana's class door**
Iroha: Th-that accuracy...! Oliver- *turns to see he's running off* O-Oliver! W-wait!
Oliver: I knew this was a bad idea!!
Iroha: This was YOUR idea!! Oliver-! *runs after him*

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Well here's something I haven't done in a long while ;w; I really miss being able to render something and have a story attached to it~! It's a new year ^^ I wanted to at least start on a good foot and do something I enjoy doing! Hopefully, I can do more this year compared to last year and actually improve my skills in what I want to do after college. These next 9 months will not be easy but as soon I finish these 9 months I will be a graduate in the bachelor's degree in Software and Game Development! I don't really share my work on games here on DA mostly because my DA is mostly mmd related and I don't have many completed games to share; I'll do my best to be a bit more active, but I can't really promise much because of life eheh;; My writing is a bit lackluster- given that I haven't written any dialogue for a long time. I want to improve my dialogue writing a lot more this year! I miss exploring my headcannons for vocaloid characters! Oliver is so precious xD he's doing his best! Even though he delivered his feelings to the wrong person- he still delivered it! So... That's a good first step! Wingman Iroha is best wingman. The dialogue is a little generic, but it's a start!

I hope you all have a happy new year and I hope 2019 treats us better than 2018!

~Credits~
MODEL
YYB Rin, Len, and Tianyi: YYB
Macne Nana: AOONI
Nekomura Iroha V4: ISAO 
Oliver: L3nkun and

STAGE
[classroom] 普通教室改: 31040

ACCESSORY
Paper Plane (hearts):

SKYDOME
Cloudy Blue ver 2: 

EFFECT
NCHLShader: nil
SvSSAO and Diffusion7: そぼろ

edited with Pixeluvo
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Comments: 9

Kokoro-Hane [2020-01-24 13:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, how did I miss this render? Nice work with it and the dialogue!

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NyaStyle [2019-09-05 02:58:33 +0000 UTC]

OH MAN This melted my heart 
 the cutest thing of my day

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CrystalPudding In reply to NyaStyle [2019-09-05 03:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it ;v;!

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NyaStyle In reply to CrystalPudding [2019-09-08 16:11:15 +0000 UTC]

you deserve it~~  

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PhoenixMagicStar [2019-01-02 20:12:22 +0000 UTC]

It's so cute. Aaa i love the idea 

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CrystalPudding In reply to PhoenixMagicStar [2019-01-03 15:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you ;v;!

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RoseprincessDia [2019-01-02 01:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Omg this is adorable :3 and I love the story

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CrystalPudding In reply to RoseprincessDia [2019-01-03 15:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Th-thank you...!

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RoseprincessDia In reply to CrystalPudding [2019-01-04 02:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome 😊

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