wolf02 [2003-12-23 00:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written

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Daiichi [2003-12-22 07:21:05 +0000 UTC]

The great thing for thsi poem is that it is powerful, but not foreceful..Matter-of Fact, not suggestion...And it is a poem for those who feel your way, and not the usual sorrowful tale of a poem that someone like me would write..Fantastic work..

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jellybeanpixie [2003-12-21 16:37:43 +0000 UTC]

aww beepbop. things could change you never know, this could just be one of those "things" it's only gone for good if you want it too be, im not sure what you're thinking though i can only assume. beautiful poems, i've read every single one of them. i think about them, but i cannot comment on all because i dont have any usefull comments in my little brain that could be nearly as helpful as the others. Keep writing, lotta people really can relate to your feelings

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Rei-Syndrom [2003-12-21 16:15:13 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem! Though it makes me remember that my best friend now lives in Flordia...

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devur [2003-12-21 16:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I could never feel this way. I brood over friends that I've lost years ago. And that I'm losing. But good for you, and this is a great poem. I feel like doing something out of the ordinary, so I'll give this a

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FuLlOfSpUnK [2003-12-21 15:39:53 +0000 UTC]

im guessing this is about emilyso im just gonna back away *runs out the door*

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specifulme [2003-12-21 13:03:05 +0000 UTC]

koolie

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turbotopher [2003-12-21 08:14:47 +0000 UTC]

wow that was really good. I could see that being published or somethen! Awsome job!

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