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Published: 2008-01-31 13:33:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 6758; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 75
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warning, huuuuuuuge file~!!!!with huge improvements. I feel like neglecting my work, that's why.
aaand, i'm totally out of ideas.. whew.
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I'm really crying now. DAMN YOU TAANG FEELS!!!
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I am so enamored. I could die happy just by seeing this.
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what do you mean when shes older, she has always looked lovely, that is her tomboy charm
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you're...out of ideas?
noooooooooo! *cries*
I hope you find some, though. this is an awesome story.
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OMG!!!! (yeah, I usually don't use this)
I absolutally LOVE your facial expressions!!!
They are SO EXTREMELY GOOD!!!!!
NICENESS!!!!
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That was fantastic. You draw these characters so expressively and well! I'll be on the lookout if you ever find the time/inspiration to update!
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Just found this page and the comic.
It's moving along quite well, and the style is really nice! Some great, sketchy and lively looking Aang, Toph and everyone, really.
Very nice work.
Here's hoping you can continue, at your own pace.
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wow, thank you for the great encouragement! I usually spend enough time with drawing, but this year's schedule is eating up all my free hours. ^^
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Wow, this is one well thought out, brilliantly illustrated comic. *props*
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ok i am not letting u stop i will force u to connue if i have to this is too good of a story to drop like u did so there now hurry up and do some drawing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:] lol... plz??
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Wow aang u just have to find her. Nice story overall excellent ^^
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nice man... i look forward to the rest as soon as you finish them
firstly sorry for not reviewing as soon as they came out... i'm still getting used to the controls on this site...
-very cool as always
-F~K
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oh this is awesome 
Love older Toph, too. Can't wait for more
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Ohohoho.....this is a reaaaaaally cool concept. I <3 OLDER AANG.
I really like Toph's posture in the first frame with her and little Aang. Also, the frame where Toph is yelling at him (I think it's the first to last) is really good. I like Aang's expression. I can't wait for the next page!
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^^ thank you for following the short comic, though i think i won't be updating in days! I still have to think about what happens next, or who comes out... while studying for my exams...bleeghhrr.
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Yeah, it's a pleasure to read it. Ugh, sorry about your exams. Looking forward to the next few pages.
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it's ok, sketching on one panel every night aint so bad. ><
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xD Yeah, that's not too horrible.
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*Foams and passes out*
Oh. My. God. @__@ How, HOW do you manage to make comics so well? To draw everyone so crazygood? Aang's face in the second top panel is so funny. X3 And... jeeze, everytime I look at it I find something new I love! Toph's feet are awesome, and the angles of everything... you have mad talent with angles and expressions, you know that? I love Older!Aang to bits, especially in the third-last frame. Spirits, I love your work.
The words at the bottom... is Toph the one saying, "You better hurry, then"?
In the panel where Aang says, "What I want it to be...?" his ring finger's bendy line is curving up, which gives this optical ilusion that his fingers are bending backwards from the knuckle. Not healthy. And, umm... I think Toph's face is a little too small in the last panel. But 'sides that, everything's spectacular.
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i knew it. 0_0 well, that's what you get for rushing.. aaaand i was kinda lazy to adjust it. oh, and yep, she did say the last line.
thank you for the great comment!and the critic too, i would have never made a second glance to check my work, but because you mentioned it, i'll be more careful and attentive next time. thank you!
Im really really out of ideas, i don't know where to start next! ^^ but i'll update sooner, it hink.
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You're out of ideas? You mean, you just write these out as the come to you? o__o Jeeze~! I should start doing that. XD Maybe then I'd get some comics done.
Dunno if I can help you on that front. Have you read Oblivious? You might get some ideas from that. [link]
^^ Glad I could help! It's just reflex to comment on your work, 'cause it's the sort of thing I want to comment on. 'Sides, it looked like your work was getting a little ignored (I shall have to change this!). :/
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