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Published: 2010-10-28 14:53:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1418; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 19
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Young lady on a couch.Related content
Comments: 15
Good choice using the white shirt, it really makes this model pop from the environment. The contrast also helps with that. There is nothing too distracting in the environment other than the window. Unfortunately it competes with the model. But, it does create an excellent source of back lighting. Particularly to the left of the girl. So, it is helping and hurting at the same time. It's a tough one. Maybe try to decrease the brightness levels of the window so it's not brighter than the shirt. It's still a really strong piece. I like how you've given this a soft, dreamlike look. Nice work Danie.
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Thank you Mr.D. My first critique!! How exciting, so glad it was a good one.
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sorry that i haven't been attending, but you amaze me with your talent. thx
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For me a little too soft. It looks a little tacky, 80ies, early 90ies style. If you wanted that fair enough, but the rest of the picture looks more like I don't know, 50ies, 60ies? Apart from that the picture is alright to me.
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