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tarzi-kins [2007-04-14 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's going to be difficult since there's no full view, but I willl definitely critique it as best as I can.

The first thing I noticed was her neck and her jawline. People can't turn their heads that far. (Trust me. It's painful just to try. n_n; ) And the head and the neck just kinda...blend. It's like there's no jaw or something (and the chin could probably be more defined, too). I wish I could show you, but I have no tablet and my scanner remains a mystery to me. Sorry. >.<

The second thing is her left hand, the one holding the moon. You did a lovely job on the right hand, but the left looks like it's got no wrist and the thumb looks a little wierd, like it's been sucked into the moon. XD;

And then there's the skirt...it looks like that first few inches is plastered to her leg or something. When the wind picks up a skirt, the entire skirt is affected. You don't have to make the top billowing out like the rest of it, but you should make it at least a little more...out, I guess. :]

For the record, though, you did a great job and I am never going to be able to paint like that. XD;

Keep up the good work! Again, sorry I can't show you directly since I've got no tablet till July, but hopefully this was a bit helpful. n_n

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bluegirl4 [2007-04-12 03:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Her head's a little funny looking, but I love everything else! To me it looked loke she's holding the sun and the moon.

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Elvenstarz [2007-04-11 01:38:10 +0000 UTC]

Ah, at first I thought it'd be fanart of Twilight. XDD

It's very pretttty. <3 The dress is absolutely gorgeous.

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Sajira [2007-04-10 23:56:54 +0000 UTC]

SEE THATS IT!!! ^_^ I knew you could do hair like that I knew you could Lovely just lovely. The back of her head is a little shallow but the rest is beautiful. The folds in her clothes look very nice and crisp and her hands are wonderful. You should be very proud of this Raven. By the way your Averix is becoming a wonderful character to work with. I have given her a personality that is calm and reflective, calculating, and warm and humorous. She is shaping up to be perfect thank you so much for letting me use her

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