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elsevilla [2016-05-03 01:32:56 +0000 UTC]
Nice drawing man good to see ya back.
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mase0ne [2016-04-30 04:50:24 +0000 UTC]
Ah - much better. As for critiques, the nose is pointed straight at us, but his head overall is not, but just slightly. The anatomy on his upper right arm could use some love too. Overall it's looking great.
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danimation2001 In reply to mase0ne [2016-04-30 05:38:25 +0000 UTC]
Nicely spotted, I'll give the nose a tweak in the right direction a bit. I'll also work the arm as well a bit more. Given that the torso is turned a bit to the left we probably should see the side of the outer arm more and not the under inside of the arm right?
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mase0ne In reply to danimation2001 [2016-04-30 16:31:45 +0000 UTC]
His gi should probably hide most of his right shoulder if he's turned - I can do a drawover if you want.
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mase0ne In reply to danimation2001 [2016-05-01 04:51:40 +0000 UTC]
Cool - I have one temporarily in scraps:
Superimpose this over your drawing - it might help around the chest and shoulder area.
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