thejaguar9 [2011-11-25 06:31:22 +0000 UTC]
this looks great!!!!
THAT STRAWBERRY LOOKED REAL TO ME FOR A SECOND
GOSH
YOU'RE REALLY GOOD
man, where she's standing looks really delicious
oh darn
now i'm hungry
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!
improve:
he face. it feels like you merged to different perspectives of faces?? i dunno.. it kinda looks... off :/
also, i noticed some things werent colored O:
like the necklace she wears. the pendant wasnt colored
and there are two circles in her hair??
and some lines on her leg and arms... i think... indicating chocolate that was supposed to be there (i think)
and her left arm... it looks like it's being pulled back..? O: it should be facing towards the audience and the other hand... you have to draw the arm in a way that it's obvious the arm is slightly overlapping it. dunno how to explain it XD sorry!
such a bright and lovely picture! it looks great! : D
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DanPopu In reply to thejaguar9 [2012-02-15 21:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Huhuhu thankss!!
Own you noticed it all~ This drawing took me a LOOOOT of effort and time to color, with all th background and the icecream and all... I was so tired of coloring that I just forgot to do the chocolate drops, and when I noticed... I was tooooooo lazy~ ^^''
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