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DanteKaiko — Commission for Leviathys
Published: 2012-08-10 18:45:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 952; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 21
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Ruu...8 hours with Paint tool SAI
This piece belong to , please don't use it without his permission...
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I have never given anyone critique before so bare with me !
Ok first off from my point of view you could have given it more detail maybe?
The shadows are decent but there are lot's of place for improvement there, and just about this picture it feels like I have to twist my head to see the actual picture the way it is ment to be seen which feels a little annoying but I guess you cant call it wrong either.
When looking at this picture it doesn't give me the feeling that makes me go like wow. Which I think is because you haven't made enought details on her clothes (patterns, wristbands, jewelry , some kind of air flowing through, a bit of space between the shirt and her body to make it look more 3d)
Last thing , the picture doesnt seem to have correct light at some places.
Don't hate me for this (>*-*>)
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nhiều vậy thì ko nên ẩu, để lần sau nó còn đặt com mày
BTW, TLR DARKNESS anime đây, mùa thu này chiếu
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