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Dark-Momento-Mori β Kingdom Hearts 8th B1 Ch1 P28
Published: 2011-08-14 22:40:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1275; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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The end of Chapter 1 of 8th! Amazing! A big thanks to all my watchers! Now there will be a little wait for the cover of the next one because I found a free painter program that I will be using for the background.I have to apologize for the poor quality I've been working at for the past few pages of 8th. So, sorry for the bad art. . .
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8th Β© Dark-Momento-Mori
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This is amazing. How did I survive without this all my life
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Mori's such a cutie~ She's all sweet and cheering him on and Riku's such a butthead. I'm starting to remember why I didn't like him back in the first game.
This is my first time reading a KH fancomic starring an OC, I'm so used to written fanfic but yours is really amazing!
I'm interested in finding out more about what Mori can do. Ah, that's why I love OCs, it's always fun to see what people come up with and how they work their own little alternate universe.
I was not expecting her to leave her world in that way, it's most definitely creative.
Anywho, I've got some catching up to do. I'll try to review at least once each chapter, though.
It's been a great read so far :]
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I had a weird love/hate view with his character the first time I played it when I was little. I didn't have any friends at the time and I completely immersed myself into Sora so his friends were mine. I hate the person Riku became but he was still my best friend, right? I've got to make him better! I was really little when I first played it.
I'm really trying to keep Mori's powers following theΒ original cannon.Β Β
I look forward to reading your reviews. I like to know how I can improve.
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That last panel is great! I love the close up of the face/one-eye.
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Thanks! It was all for dramatic effect
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Another typo! Should be "wasting" your time, not "waiting"
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>///< I totally didn't notice the typos! Thanks for pointing them out. I'll fix them when I get home.
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I'm a bit of a typo Nazi ^^'
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I may be a grammarian but sometimes spelling eludes me. If you see anymore typos please tell me so I can change them quickly.
((I haven't had time to fix these to yet, but I don't have classes tomorrow so I'll do it in the morning. . .))
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Will do! Together, we can help this comic to conquer the universe! BWAHAAHAHA
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MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! My plan is working!!!!
XD
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