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I hope you don't mind a helpfull hint..... but the part where he says "I seen my ... her die and couldn't do anything about it!!" It's a bit hard to read "I seen my h-" because the background is lighter there cuz it's the sky.
If you made the letters darker it'd be easier to read.... it maybe strange to have 2 colored words but it helps fellow readers see and read that part a bit more clearly.
Other than that, I don't see anything else really.... once again I hope you didn't mind and no offence as I was just trying to help a little bit...
Love the comic too by the way! I'm fully stuck on it- hook, line and me! 
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Pfff, i don't mind at all 
Sometimes i finish a page veeery late and details like this slip through Actually, thanks to You pointing out that little thing I discovered there's also a typo there.
And thanks, I'll try to update it ASAP
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You're very welcome and yay! btw, I can't wait 
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Are the two lions on this page the "shadow lions"? Because in that case, I have not noticed util now. In one panel they have bracelets, in another they don't. And there names change, too? Well I am confused.
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No, only Dark uses that additional name "Shadow" mostly out of slight dual personality disorder and a little paranoia XD. It will be further explained later.
As for the lack of bracelets in some panels , I mostly find time to draw in laaate evening, so sometimes I can forget to put a thing or two in the image 
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oooo!!!!!
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Thanks! I'll get it done as soon as i can.
Sorry for slow answer ^^'
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welcome!! oh boy! well dont rush it, but dont take too long either.lol. and no prob! i've had slower answers before
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