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This took a bit longer than normal because i'm trying to put some more effort into the shading and backgrounds. However, i am in great need of advice as to how to improve both those aspects.

The bubbles may be a little messy here too, I had put so much love and attention into drawing Ornstein's Rocket of all things (Rocket E-14159 ) that when i went back to the rough and realised i was putting a giant text bubble there, i was very sad. So I divided Ornstein's text to put in seperate bubbles around him instead.

I also realised a problem with having Cornelius so pale coloured - Text bubbles don't show up ON him very well, so the text bubble that originally went on his face was moved to between the two panels of him.

SMACK is great onomatopoeia.

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Description
This took a bit longer than normal because i'm trying to put some more effort into the shading and backgrounds. However, i am in great need of advice as to how to improve both those aspects.

The bubbles may be a little messy here too, I had put so much love and attention into drawing Ornstein's Rocket of all things (Rocket E-14159 ) that when i went back to the rough and realised i was putting a giant text bubble there, i was very sad. So I divided Ornstein's text to put in seperate bubbles around him instead.

I also realised a problem with having Cornelius so pale coloured - Text bubbles don't show up ON him very well, so the text bubble that originally went on his face was moved to between the two panels of him.

SMACK is great onomatopoeia.

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