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LordUnigon [2017-08-08 05:07:23 +0000 UTC]
(Gets in front of Topico to defend him)
Cordelia: Stay away from my cousin!!!
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KingkyLeor [2017-06-24 17:47:24 +0000 UTC]
topaze, you're a magnificent magical unicorn.... beam him to death, or until a limb starts to fall
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Dawn22Eagle In reply to KingkyLeor [2017-06-25 10:25:27 +0000 UTC]
He's way too scared, and wouldn't hurt anyone even if threatened...
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KingkyLeor In reply to Dawn22Eagle [2017-06-25 12:10:18 +0000 UTC]
oh my lord i was just kidding XD
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alexacana In reply to KingkyLeor [2017-06-24 20:21:41 +0000 UTC]
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO OUR PRECIOUS BLUEBERRY WHYYYYY
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RavenRoseCrow [2017-06-24 02:27:15 +0000 UTC]
You did really nicely with getting that emotional impact across. I like the way you punctuate what's going on with Topacio trying to go to his happy place, but the fear dragging him back. Your language is really good here in particular; the descriptors you use really help with the weight of the situation. And it shows a lot about Topacio's character: how he desperately doesn't want to fight, but only craves to be accepted.
The picture is really good, too; the starkness of the white background with only the weight of the shading really emphasizes the situation. The body language between the two is really amazing: you can see the almost physical pressure the deer is putting on Topacio with his presence alone, let alone the damage he's done already. There's a cockiness there more than confidence that really adds to the sense of the deer being a bully and the aggressor, and Topacio's learned helplessness speaks through the way he's pulling away, how you can see he visibly doesn't want to fight. It all comes across really well and I continue to really admire the way you do body language so well.
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RavenRoseCrow In reply to Dawn22Eagle [2017-06-24 13:26:10 +0000 UTC]
I spend a lot of time with horses so I've learned how important that is. It's part of why I like your art so much; you capture them so realistically, so to speak. It never fails to impress me.
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Dawn22Eagle In reply to RavenRoseCrow [2017-06-24 17:14:31 +0000 UTC]
You are really lucky then <3 I've spent my whole childhood reading books about animals so I rarely miss details like those when observing or drawing ahah
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RavenRoseCrow In reply to Dawn22Eagle [2017-06-24 17:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Your attention to detail really shows. I love that. You can really the effort you put into things and how well you know your subjects.
And thanks. Being around the horses always makes me feel better, no matter what else is going on.
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unigon-dragicorn In reply to RavenHeart1984 [2017-06-23 20:54:41 +0000 UTC]
I can see Cordella coming and standings up for him. "Leave my cousin alone, you Manticore wannabe!"
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Sylph264 [2017-06-23 14:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Noooooooooooooo! Leave him alone, you jerk! *flails* Why do you do this to usssss....
Well, on the bright side, you aren't only being cruel to your character and your readership... You captured the emotion excellently visually, and the written piece really tugs on your heartstrings to read. *cries* Good... *sniff* job...
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Dawn22Eagle In reply to Sylph264 [2017-06-23 16:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh don't say that, I'm not that good after all <3
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Sylph264 In reply to Dawn22Eagle [2017-06-23 20:24:31 +0000 UTC]
*threatens with newspaper* You callin' me a liar? Just take the compliment, silly. If I didn't believe it I wouldn't have said it. ^^
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Dawn22Eagle In reply to Sylph264 [2017-06-24 09:35:01 +0000 UTC]
I knew the newspaper would've come XD Alright then, thanks a lot <3
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Sylph264 In reply to Dawn22Eagle [2017-06-24 18:33:33 +0000 UTC]
You are more than welcome. ^^ *puts newspaper away... for now*
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