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Published: 2011-06-15 13:32:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1299; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 18
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Description A follow up to this:
The Scout

comments and crits greatly appreciated!
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Comments: 5

Soulslayer317 [2012-12-19 20:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice tank mechs! Like how you done the ruined city background also,

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dcartshed In reply to Soulslayer317 [2013-01-04 05:32:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! Glad you like it!!

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EdonGuraziu [2012-11-11 22:04:48 +0000 UTC]

Great composition. I love the mood but the only thing I miss the the dynamic. It feels a bit static :/
I know it's really hard to capture that man. I can't do something like this so great respect. But as I see the mech is fighting and receives a lighting attack. I also see dirt flying around his leg. You could have added some more directional blur to flying parts. And maybe you could have 'popped' the person in the front a bit more. The bounce light on the person and mech are nice but you kinda have to look for the action (witch I think is your selling point) cause the whole mech draws the attention.

A lot of critique but that's the only way to improve I think. Definitely including myself You're way better than I am. But this is how it feels. I hope you can build up from this ;] Please keep up with this and perhaps show me an updated version? Good luck comrade!

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dcartshed In reply to EdonGuraziu [2012-12-09 10:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Hi DrZoidberg96! Thanks for making the time and effort in commenting. Very useful! I would love to have an updated piece but I would have to find the source files(This was done more than 2 years ago). Will try to apply what you mention too if i have time to work on a new piece(Which I hope) Thanks once again!!

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EdonGuraziu In reply to dcartshed [2012-12-09 12:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing comrade
I'm excited to see your updated piece one day...

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