Veherzak [2019-08-24 20:21:29 +0000 UTC]
She reminds me of Sakura from Naruto, just with different colours for her hair and eyes. Not that she’s exactly the same, but I get a very similar feeling from the short red dress over shorts and the gloves. That’s not a complaint, though, just an observation – I like her look a lot.
I do find one thing confusing – the bio says she grew up with her father and mother but later says she didn’t meet her father until she was seventeen.
Still, she sounds interesting. I’m curious to see how her having high stamina but still burning through it quickly works – that should be fun, as should her erratic behaviour.
Another fun character! And good artwork too! Thanks for sharing her with us.
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deadxbite In reply to Veherzak [2019-08-24 21:38:48 +0000 UTC]
That's really interesting because Sakura didn't even cross my mind when I was coming up with her look.
About her father that was just an oversight and poor wording on my part when I condensed her bio. It's true she didn't see her father till she was seventeen but she heard from him frequently so she still got advice and talked ro him about the things she was excited about frequently. He always supported Marigold and her mother financially too. Because of all that she personally didn't feel like she missed out on having her father around even though seventeen years passed before she was able to hug him for the first time. Her father is a very secretive man.
My original plan was to have it where she was flown out of the country with two bodyguards that raised her. She thought of them as her real parents but they took her to meet her actual father when she was seventeen so I think that's where I got mixed up. I decided to change that part of her bio last minute. Thanks for pointing that out! I'll have to fix it when I get the chance.
As for the bit about her stamina that was also an over sight (which is why I should stop putting characters bios together so late at night / early in the morning). I realized how contradictory the idea of having high stamina and burning through it quickly would sound and I intended to rework that a bit but completely forgot. I also meant to add that she has terrible pacing and tends to think she's immune to fatigue, which might have helped to clarify things a bit.
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Veherzak In reply to deadxbite [2019-08-25 09:51:31 +0000 UTC]
Heh. It's certainly not a complaint, I think her look is great. Just something that crossed my mind.
Thanks for clearing those up and I look forward to reading about her in action.
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