Comments: 48
lucy1094591 [2014-06-18 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]
please do more :3
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DragonDarkFire [2013-02-12 02:26:03 +0000 UTC]
i would be interested in seeing more
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ameliacamp [2013-01-19 23:42:53 +0000 UTC]
CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE
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glitterkyo [2012-11-27 13:45:41 +0000 UTC]
Part 4!!
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nATILE [2012-11-11 23:25:55 +0000 UTC]
Continue!!!!!!!!!!
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NekoVani [2012-08-30 23:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Do continue~!!
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KylaDragonfly [2012-06-04 19:58:08 +0000 UTC]
please continue!!!!**
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GoddessGirl1 [2012-02-24 00:02:27 +0000 UTC]
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was just getting good and then it ended
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MyCookiex [2011-11-22 20:58:53 +0000 UTC]
You should continue - this is cuuute :3
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Midnightkiller1000 [2011-09-22 19:54:56 +0000 UTC]
YOU TOTALY SHOULD CONTINIUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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penguin40 [2011-09-10 18:18:59 +0000 UTC]
u should totally continue u r the best yaoi writer on dA <3
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lucylu56 [2011-06-29 07:01:18 +0000 UTC]
yes u should XD i love them!!!!!
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yaoidarkness [2011-06-12 04:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Yes, continue please it was a good story!
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kitten120024 [2011-05-23 23:56:35 +0000 UTC]
do it.
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emilyricardi [2011-04-15 02:35:49 +0000 UTC]
YOU SHOULD IT WAS GETTING GOOD!
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Madhatta23 [2011-03-20 22:29:39 +0000 UTC]
The plot is good, infact REALLY good.. You should work on your grammar though.. there are some places where you sort of lost me.. like when they start to talk.. you don't use any grammar or start a new sentence when a new person is talking. The story is AWESOME but you might want to look over it just a bit. Great Job.
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Damian-The-Demon [2011-02-16 00:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Part 4 definitely.
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xScarletxRainx [2011-01-19 05:05:53 +0000 UTC]
yes!! Ple~ase continue!
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mackie620 [2011-01-14 22:46:10 +0000 UTC]
this was really good ^^ if you want to make a part 4 go ahead... this was very smexi...
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dotti55 [2011-01-14 18:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh you absolutely should, this is delicious PWP. Everyone needs a good one of these once in a while and this is definitely a good one!
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taliwali97 [2010-12-01 22:28:23 +0000 UTC]
this is good i really like it *faves*
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ObitoUchiha50 [2010-10-14 03:08:19 +0000 UTC]
You can continue if you want to, it's really good XD
I was thinking how funny it would be if Light's dad was to find out... B3
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