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Published: 2009-04-05 17:27:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1766; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 20
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Description Name: Rivet
Age: 21
Order: NONE
Characteristics:
- very very irresponsible
- very sly, able to cunningly achieve her goals
- is good with locks and machines

Rivet lived in a small village of Blacksmiths, the very same place were Lace came from. She was the daughter of one of the best blacksmiths in town, only second to Zenith... Lace's father. Despite Rivet's less than admirable character, she has occasionally shown a caring side to the other children younger than her. After Zenith's disappearance, people from village suddenly started disappearing one by one. For Rivet, this was a chance to get away from the boring life in the village. She decided to "disappear" and venture outside to see the rest world.

Shaft Blacklist:
Rivet has been permanently banned from entering the mage city of Shaft for impersonating an archmagi and ordering her subordinates to do "magic tricks". She was able to talk herself out of prison and got banned from the city instead.

Iron Maiden
Rivet currently runs a machine shop with her assistants, Nut and Bolt, in the crossroads city Hub. She repairs/buys/sells various machines from people passing by the Hub, conning unwitting merchants in her free time.



Full view please. Thanks
Rivet, Lace © deboahan

* Oh, and I got the idea for the "tattoo enhancements" from Thanks man.
* Here's the old design: [link] Changed it a bit cause I think it resembled someone else's OC too much. Plus, I dun like Baiken that much now.
* IF anyone does care and wonders... here's Lace: [link]
* Oh, and something about Shaft: [link]
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Comments: 27

z3r0t0lerance [2009-04-07 08:28:25 +0000 UTC]

weird yung sa bandang hip, parang dislocated. (opinion ko lang), yung pagkabend kasi ng katawan niya parang hindi bagay dun sa positioning nung right leg or siguro dahil lang sa skirt, sort of optical illusion.

pero astig ng tattooes at nung character design. mas mukhang siyang mature dito sa redux mo na to pero mas gusto ko yung una hehe

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deboahan In reply to z3r0t0lerance [2009-04-07 15:54:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh ganun? Hmm ge check ko yan!
Medyo wierd lang yung sa leg part, kasi yung pagkakagawa ko dun sa skirt, may manipis na black sa gilid... parang indi tuloy pantay yung edge ng hip na naka jot out tsaka yung leg sa baba niya.

Anyways, salamat na marami sa input! Haha tama lang yan, mature dapat talaga dating ni Rivet. XD

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z3r0t0lerance In reply to deboahan [2009-04-07 23:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Ilan taon na ba siya?

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deboahan In reply to z3r0t0lerance [2009-04-13 05:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Nasa profile niya. 21 lang.

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z3r0t0lerance In reply to deboahan [2009-04-15 06:24:22 +0000 UTC]

napaghahalata akong di nagbabasa hehe

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Maksn [2009-04-07 01:44:53 +0000 UTC]

her midsection looks a lil iffy, IMO, but thats proly just me. x_x nice job on the redesign! She looks more in character this way, though the 1st design was also adorable. C:

I love the hat, reminds me of einbroch~

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deboahan In reply to Maksn [2009-04-07 15:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha it's the style that was adorable if you ask me. Well... didn't really fit her, can't tell the age so I guess this is for the better.

Thanks for the input!

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Maksn In reply to deboahan [2009-04-14 14:59:05 +0000 UTC]

i guess so, but im biased. 8D *hugs collection of purpley-ness and wings*

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ryuumi20 [2009-04-06 13:40:43 +0000 UTC]

coolness!

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deboahan In reply to ryuumi20 [2009-04-06 17:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Raja-Ulat [2009-04-06 00:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Must be quite the con artist to do what she did...

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deboahan In reply to Raja-Ulat [2009-04-06 18:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha I'm still thinking of how she got about to doing it. I have some stuff in mind, so maybe I'll post a nother dev about it sometime.

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Raja-Ulat In reply to deboahan [2009-04-07 04:39:11 +0000 UTC]

LOL.

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admiral-squee [2009-04-05 19:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Fun design and history and GOOD GOD SOMEONE STOLE THAT POOR WOMAN'S PANTS!

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deboahan In reply to admiral-squee [2009-04-05 20:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Haha she thinks pants are too much hassle.
No stop gawking and post sumthn already!

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admiral-squee In reply to deboahan [2009-04-11 20:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Aw, but I cannot post because of my evil firewall!

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deboahan In reply to admiral-squee [2009-04-13 05:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Damn D:
Well, hope you fix it soon.

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Rabadenzo [2009-04-05 19:10:07 +0000 UTC]

I think slightly brighter colours would fit the character better, and the thumb doesn't really stand out because of the chains on her left arm
but that's all I could say about it

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deboahan In reply to Rabadenzo [2009-04-05 19:14:36 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah, I totally agree about the thumb. XD It contrasts too much from the surrounding stuff so it looks kinda disconnected.

Thanks for the input man, much appreaciated!

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Rabadenzo In reply to deboahan [2009-04-05 19:19:59 +0000 UTC]

you said you liked feedback on the forum, so I thought I'd help you.
If you want to be an awesome guy, go back to that thread and look for other people that like feedback, go give them feedback and make their day.
I do the same

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deboahan In reply to Rabadenzo [2009-04-05 19:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! XD
lol I did. Realized I can't make long and meaningful feedbacks like I used to even if I wanted to though. Makes me sad. T__T

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Rabadenzo In reply to deboahan [2009-04-05 19:45:09 +0000 UTC]

I started giving feedback a while back, it's like any other skill, you progress as you do it more often

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deboahan In reply to Rabadenzo [2009-04-05 20:01:53 +0000 UTC]

lol I've been giving feedback for a long while too. Guess I just got lazy. Also, I think I've said almost everything I can and am feeling awkward to repeat them over and over again to the same set of people. Iunno.

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Rabadenzo In reply to deboahan [2009-04-06 13:05:25 +0000 UTC]

same set of people?
yeah, it gets boring

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deboahan In reply to Rabadenzo [2009-04-06 17:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Well... the same set of people ain't boring. Me saying the same things over and over is what's boring.

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Rabadenzo In reply to deboahan [2009-04-06 19:30:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah, that's what I ment but I said it wrong

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deboahan In reply to Rabadenzo [2009-04-13 05:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha ok, it's no problem.

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