CharaTheRabbit [2018-06-12 03:11:31 +0000 UTC]
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The colors and shading is quite lovely, the style is nice, although the hand looks as if it's flipped the wrong way (don't worry, it's a simple mistake) and the shading around the eyes look out of place compared to the rest of his face but over all it's pretty cool, keep up the good work ^^(this is just random words, because apparently my critique is too short, fjdshfkjhkiuaehfkh aefuihfjkdsh fue fes eufhsfe fdshfuehws hfusedhueh sfh esufh eush fuihfueh ush ufhueis u hesuh fu sh fs hsh feshfuds fh eudhs fjdshf ue hfues hfueshufh uh s hufh dh usdfhufdsuh fshuseufu euhfs eufhu hfuh hu e u uh ignore this part)
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RandomFNAFDeves [2018-06-12 01:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is legitimately impressive! I love it! However, there are some flaws. The grainy effect makes it look a little bit awkward. I can't quite put my finger on why, but it does. Another problem that I can pinpoint is how the grainy effect interferes with the smoothness of the drawing so it makes it inconsistent. One other thing I want to point out though is how awkward the hand position is facing forward. It kind of defy's how the anatomy should be, since normally a person would hold it the other way around. And finally, the background could use a little bit of work with blending, but other than that this is a great piece and the overall feel of it is quite eerie! Great job and can't wait to see your future work!Overall Score: 15 1/2 out of 20! (good work!)
MichaelAftonB [2018-06-12 03:15:30 +0000 UTC]
I love it but I donβt get it