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defpoet — Betrayal
Published: 2003-07-08 00:56:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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Partly bcuase he\'s blindPartly becuase he\'s naive
Partly becuase he\'s closed minded
Partly becuase he\'s willing to believe
Complete purity
Complete decency
It smells your dismay
It hears your whispers
It sees, you the prey
It touches your vulnerable heart of blisters
Total prefidity
Total duplicity
It maps out the plan in pencil
having the ability to expunge
the traces of its stencil
He shows the papers for all to see
doesnt bother hiding his secrets
despite everyones plea
Misdemeanor committed
Faith starts to shift
Innocence obliterated
All principle left naked to drift
One message strives
Foe and fiend struggling
Gull pierced by sharp knives
His last message existing
Never Betray
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Comments: 5
Are you sure this didn't happen to you? Nice words...they flow very well together.
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wow! u sure are getting popular quickly here...you're gonna reach 1000 pageviews before i reach my next 1000!!
oh-the poem is great! looks like uve graduated from writing linkin park lyrics to writing some evanescance! (that was a compliment, yes)
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This is really pretty, I love the style you used to write this.. It flows very nicely and is really easy and nice to read.
This is lovely.
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This is really cool
not confused at all (well, not due to your poem at least!)
I love the first stanza.
great job!
Goodbye...
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It figures
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Nice words u added in ur poem to represent th person! I likes!
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