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Published: 2003-07-08 00:30:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description I dont need thier dreams
if I can\'t accomplish them

I dont need thier confidence
if I feel insecure

I don\'t need thier criticism
if it just puts me down

I don\'t need thier disappointed faces
becuase the mirror reflects mine

I dont need their hurt or anger
self disapointment is worse

I dont need thier blame
becuase I blame myself

Do I need them?
THAT choice WILL be mine!
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Comments: 4

enchantma [2003-07-08 23:02:34 +0000 UTC]

wow!
*speechless*

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hawkemai [2003-07-08 20:02:22 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea behind this, I find myself feeling the same way quite often ^.^;;

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damagedgirl [2003-07-08 09:40:52 +0000 UTC]

i like the seperate verses effect too.
this is my fav part:
"I don't need their disappointed faces
because the mirror reflects my own"

s for you

Goodbye...

--
It figures

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tia-the-fairy [2003-07-08 00:40:32 +0000 UTC]

this flows well
i like the way its all in seperate little verses
of course you don't need them

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