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Published: 2003-10-01 02:57:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 47
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Description i have this foreign feeling
way deep down inside
it pinches and its hurting
evolving in my mind
it makes me all warm
and happy all the time
but only when im torn
i have him by my side

this dependency scares me
how can i make it stop?
i would like to be free
by myself rise to the top!
but he is so cute
so nice and smart
..oh!.fruit!
he's playing with my heart

but i love him anyway
and he loves me
if he tries moving one step
i'll rip him into 3!
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Comments: 16

defpoet [2003-10-05 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]

lol
YEY!
dont u love it that ur nieghbors?..lol

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enchantma [2003-10-02 23:59:06 +0000 UTC]

omg! u didnt have 2!!!!!! ur so funny lan! ya 2!

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-10-03 00:00:19 +0000 UTC]

lol
i had to give u ur credit, nice and honest

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enchantma In reply to defpoet [2003-10-03 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]

wee! fun spamage!!! i hope u dont mind that i keep writing X_x lol...I have a very nice copy of the pic 4 u and if i ever get a tablet ill work really hard on coloring it lol...i laughed when i saw ur comment! anyway my fav show is on soon so I'm gonna go...and my cousin is here (AGAIN!)

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enchantma [2003-10-02 22:22:15 +0000 UTC]

ooh! i like this! (as if u dont know) i read this while u were panicking over chumash...BWAHAHA! its very cute!
and how about a little credit to me and amanda? did i scan that 0_o *cant remember* its an old pic...lol...i remember when i made all those guys for everyone...ha...it funny

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-10-02 22:52:34 +0000 UTC]

lol..sorry.lol
i was in a rush to go to bed.
ill make an annoucement

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enchantma In reply to defpoet [2003-10-02 23:22:04 +0000 UTC]

i was kidding...u think i really care?
well i really dont
so how r u now that chem is done? feel relieved? how did economics go?

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-10-02 23:48:28 +0000 UTC]

economics was BAD
chem was ok, i screwed up on one exampe that i know abt already so..there goes taht..
oh, and i did fix it up check it out..

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enchantma In reply to defpoet [2003-10-02 23:55:38 +0000 UTC]

lol...*runs 2 c*

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damagedgirl [2003-10-01 04:35:44 +0000 UTC]

i like the rhyme too. it is a fun, funny poem. last line is great lol.
yeah, um... don't see how poetry is gunna help you with your tests lol!! but if you stopped writing in class we might not get as much from you...and that would be a disaster!! so, to hell with school, just write!!! yeaya!! another problem solved!

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defpoet In reply to damagedgirl [2003-10-01 22:52:11 +0000 UTC]

lol.lol.
i think the same, i really do..lol.loll.
umn,
i have a chem test, im really freaking out, bc he only gives 10 questins, and the myth is that no one gets higher than a 50 on his first test...
im really panicing here..

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crazi8s [2003-10-01 03:01:54 +0000 UTC]

O.o *sneaks away* nice poem O.O I like the rhymes s

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defpoet In reply to crazi8s [2003-10-01 03:45:28 +0000 UTC]

lol
its natural talent i tell ya
lolol..

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crazi8s In reply to defpoet [2003-10-01 04:36:31 +0000 UTC]

ill kill to that lol

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defpoet In reply to crazi8s [2003-10-02 22:58:57 +0000 UTC]

lol

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crazi8s In reply to defpoet [2003-10-02 23:16:01 +0000 UTC]

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