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Published: 2003-12-12 05:06:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Description i need this pen to write
as this horrible feeling
makes me lose all of my might

i need my eyes to see
but they try real hard to close
don't like the future for me

i need my hand to grip
onto this dirt filled pen
which lets disgust from its tip

i need my lips to smile
they keep pressing hard and firm
wanting you to think only vile

i need to stop feeling
sick, my stomach turns over
it sees its far from healing

i need this to leave my cries
alone to myself, my ears tired
of hearing eternal sighs
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Comments: 10

Mikul [2004-04-20 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]

hey i wanted to look at your stuff since you have commented on so much of my art but poetry is not really my thing but i did like the over all feel of this poem

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defpoet In reply to Mikul [2004-04-20 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]

hehe.
thanks.
'preciate it.

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xBinaryStarx [2003-12-25 04:22:06 +0000 UTC]

makes no scence but pefect scence all in one...wonderful

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defpoet In reply to xBinaryStarx [2003-12-25 07:03:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah,,im very complicated that way lol
not a lot of ppl get me..

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blondyankee [2003-12-16 00:49:22 +0000 UTC]

i dare you to write a semi-happy poem

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defpoet In reply to blondyankee [2003-12-16 02:40:41 +0000 UTC]

i dont like dares lol espeically the ones i cant do.

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blondyankee In reply to defpoet [2003-12-18 01:48:04 +0000 UTC]

cant hurt to try now can it? u know triumph is just try with an ump lol why does that sound familiar?

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defpoet In reply to blondyankee [2003-12-18 02:16:23 +0000 UTC]

esther would be proud.

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enchantma [2003-12-13 23:24:49 +0000 UTC]

i like this style of rhyming...its really cool...its different...way 2 go!

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-12-14 05:52:58 +0000 UTC]

heh. thanks.

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