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Published: 2003-07-10 23:32:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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I am hereI am waiting
I am done anticipating
Axiety seizes me
Nervousness explores me
Can anyone reach me?
I sit I stand
I run I hide
I lay awake
Listening to my mind
I have been waiting to find
What has finally arrived
It has come here
To show me my fear
Juices surging
Power murging
Wheels turning
Colors start to drip
Memories start to slip
Pictures start to rip
The last beat of the song
The last thump made for long
Stillness caputures me again
Cursed to live life of pain
No exotic juces or rain
Just me soaked in vain
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Comments: 4
It reminds me of so much. One of those special poems that can mean so amny things. Life in general, dealing with past or a problem. Love is a huge possibility. This is just great. Touching.
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Nice piece! hmm hmm love maybe...but this is a nice piece indeed keep it up ^.^
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you said abstract so i'll give you my abstract opinion:
this seems like a love poem, not traditional, more like for someone with a fear of love. the whole process: wanting it (first stanza), scared of it (third stanza), getting it (fourth stanza), lossing it (last stanza).
Don't know.
but it is good though!
Goodbye...
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It figures
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can we start a group? this would make such an awesome song! the rhuyming is brilliant! i really like it! i kinda get the impression that the poem is talking about nervousness/tension...*shrugs* well, u asked!
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