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Published: 2005-01-25 03:58:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 32; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description IRRITATION
razors against
my dry and
worn skin

lack of pleasure
while committing
a rightful sin

FRUSTRATION
breaking out of
this blistering
skin

failure to fix
yourself from
sin

REDEMPTION
a forgone dim
light you do
not see

wrapped around
chains to keep
me free
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Comments: 5

rogueblonde86 [2005-01-25 04:04:05 +0000 UTC]

lol, so you're ganking other's poems? i suppose they wouldn't leave them in a book if they didn't want them to be found...hmmm *ponders this technique* maybe that's a good idea

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defpoet In reply to rogueblonde86 [2005-01-25 20:26:17 +0000 UTC]

what??

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rogueblonde86 In reply to defpoet [2005-01-26 06:12:21 +0000 UTC]

sorry, i was kinda babbling to myself...just ignore it

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defpoet In reply to rogueblonde86 [2005-01-26 23:03:37 +0000 UTC]

erm, okay.
bit confused. if u liked it or thoght it was crap?

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rogueblonde86 In reply to defpoet [2005-01-27 04:10:34 +0000 UTC]

um, i didn't think it was crap, i think it was well-written. I just can't identify very well with the subject matter, so that makes it hard.

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