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Published: 2003-12-30 22:36:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 52; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description alone in my thoughts
alone it huants
me, in my dreams.

together they swirl
toghether they twirl
around, in my head.

i'm getting weaker
i'm getting sicker
of you, each day.

the chains turning
the chains burning
inside, every piece of me.

can you stop yelling
can you stop telling
me. that it's nothing?

feel my pain
feel my vain
here. becuase of who?

is it because of you?
is it becuase of him?
no, just go to hell.
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Comments: 13

darkbradis [2004-01-09 01:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Now that is just beautiful.

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defpoet In reply to darkbradis [2004-01-09 04:18:04 +0000 UTC]

*big smile on face*
*gives u a hug*
thaaaaaaanks!

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blondyankee [2004-01-04 04:39:21 +0000 UTC]

yea i GUESS u could clal that attitude for amateurs like urself lol jk ...jk though i could think of soemthgn WITH a bit more attitude for ya. anyway nice work, its bloody brilliant.

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defpoet In reply to blondyankee [2004-01-04 06:02:45 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah?
i wanna know...

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damagedgirl [2004-01-03 18:42:07 +0000 UTC]

lol. yeah... great attitude.
you rock

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defpoet In reply to damagedgirl [2004-01-04 05:56:53 +0000 UTC]

lol
thanks girl lol

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hawkemai [2003-12-31 14:50:30 +0000 UTC]

This poem is nice. I especially enjoy the rhythm... you're very good at that ^.^ Ah yes, the joys of hating school. *hates school as well*

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defpoet In reply to hawkemai [2003-12-31 23:17:31 +0000 UTC]

cheers

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enchantma [2003-12-31 00:47:16 +0000 UTC]

wow! nice work! i hate school too....especially this yr...its funny how we all do and we all hate it so much....me u manda and lauren and chan...lol...well great minds think alike
DUDE! just keep thinking 5 months! no wait---less! jan, feb, march...may...4 months!!! YAY! we have so much vacation! hey, we did 4 months already, we just have to do it again! no big deal right?
omg...i sound funny...im...*gasp* OPTIMISTIC!!!!! AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-12-31 03:31:02 +0000 UTC]

rofl..i still cant picture u optimistic lol

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enchantma In reply to defpoet [2003-12-31 03:42:01 +0000 UTC]

its so NOT easy!!

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defpoet In reply to enchantma [2003-12-31 23:21:39 +0000 UTC]

i bet it isnt lol

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copperhead2121 [2003-12-30 23:26:12 +0000 UTC]

*giggle* Go to hell.

I've had these thoughts once or twice.


AN HOUR!

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