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gunneson88 [2012-12-14 04:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Lugh one of the many tuath denanan
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Selunec [2009-07-09 05:39:31 +0000 UTC]
I like pencil drawing and I think that this one is very nice!!!
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Fireflowerlass In reply to Degare [2009-07-08 18:23:15 +0000 UTC]
Haha! I like the idea! Best of luck with your writing!
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Captain200 [2009-06-11 11:28:57 +0000 UTC]
He looks like an interesting type
regards
David
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Captain200 In reply to Degare [2009-06-16 11:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
I look forward to it. I hope you have fun doing it - thats the main thing!I hope you don,t mind me plying you with questions.
Out of interest -
1.What did you think of the story?
2. Were there any scenes you particulary liked ?
3.Do you think the warriors should have been made to be more technological and less earthy?
4. Do you think the big flared trousers of the soldiers worked or not ?
Anyway, thanks for taking the time.
Regards
David
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Degare In reply to Captain200 [2009-08-06 13:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Hey, sorry for the late reply to this. I was hoping to wait until I had some art to upload for you, but it turns out I'm more lazy than I thought! ... Well, not lazy. I've actually had an overwhelming sense of artistic creativity lately, but this has also meant that I can't keep up with everything I want to do, I have so many projects!
So just to reassure you, the drawing is coming. Actually, there are a few, so ...
Anyway, in answer to your questions:
1 - I did like the story - the premise is really interesting seeing the difference between men and women if separated. Though I have to ask, how are any babies made? I get that the soldiers are clones, but are the Amazon women as well? (PS - Should I be a little offended that the women reverted to a primitive iron-age race whilst the men get all civilised? Hah! )
2 - I liked the scene where Taima nabbed her first soldier, mainly because of her reaction to seeing a man for the first time. It was so innocently curious - because really, she had no frame of reference
3 - As for making the warriors more techno ... well, that's really writer's choice. It depends where YOU want the story to go. I can see that both sides are complete opposites, and therefore have to represent almost extreme versions of themselves (technology versus earth-bound - almost like Science vs Religion) in order for the point to be made that both sides can't exist without the other. What I gathered from the hints of Taima's dream, it seems she realises that men and women once worked together, and should again - except during PMT!
4 - Flared trousers - a very good visual narrative. Though I have to wonder that the soldiers could fight anyone at all - on any surface - if their trousers were indeed so long. I sense mucho tripping along the way
Hope you're not fuming too much over the wait Your art will come soon ... and now I'm worried it'll be anticlimatic!
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Captain200 In reply to Degare [2009-08-15 03:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Enjoy the creative flow! Thanks for the feedback - yes male vs female when separated but complementary when together. No the warriors are not clones - The babies? well they come from the slaves the warriors have captured, but the women have enough gene technology to breed only females (In 1st Chapter which Im still doing).
Yes Yaimas first close look of a male - the sailor she shot is an interesting image - thanks.
No dont be offended the men were more technologically advanced - they were also more stupid and clumsy!
yes its a shame about PMT and as for the flared pants they symbolise the mens clumsiness - plus I modelled the idea on some big flared jeans I made (In the photos on my galler) and while they can drag about I really like them.
Anyway - until next time
Regards
David
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Captain200 In reply to Degare [2009-08-17 08:34:05 +0000 UTC]
Fun! I hope you enjoy yourself doing them too, thats the main thing. I look forward to seeing them. What ideas do you have ?
David
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Captain200 In reply to Degare [2009-08-29 02:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Cool! It would be great to see a soldier! They probably arnt quite as colourful as the warriors but I guess if emphasis is placed on their wide and long bellbottoms and big hats it will add interest. Look forward to it and have fun.
David
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fake-blood [2009-05-29 15:15:40 +0000 UTC]
hmmmm is it a stag??
celtic gaurdian of knowledge?
lovely picture by the way ^_^ beautifull detail.
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