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dekw In reply to IkazuchiRyu [2009-11-12 00:20:52 +0000 UTC]
People are subjective and opinionated; freedom of speech also exists. This makes a properly functional security system rather difficult. In conclusion, I try my best okay. After all, the best security system would appear to be not posting, and, well, I stuck with that for a few months and then it got boring.
Also, I generally show this kinda stuff to Spira when I'm too shy to show it to anyone else, and she's not here, so...
(I'm never satisfied with almost anything I write, if I don't note it specifically I just forgot to)
The dialogue itself is probably some of the most natural-feeling stuff to write. It's only when I get a really weird idea I implement as, like, surreal foreshadowing or the like that is more natural.
...that poor review. You're not even trying.
Although funnily enough I don't necessarily ask for criticism, despite how I used to. My friend sifl does... extensive critiques. Long stuff covering almost everything. And she's not mean or anything, it's just that after a bit I lose my ability to trudge through and fix my own stuff, which makes me feel bad. (No really it's not your fault sifl if you're reading this; I won't be surprised if you do)
If your criticism's under a thousand words in length overall, then I'm probably fine, let's say
At any rate, thanks; I can... grudgingly acknowledge others seem to enjoy what I write.
(I just refuse to believe that it is possessing of any positive qualities, which I suppose is indirectly insulting to anyone who enjoys it, but hey that's just a side-effect)
But actually, it wouldn't be a compliment if you said it was The Grapes of Wrath, as that would be an accusation of plagiarism. Which might be funny, I guess.
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IkazuchiRyu In reply to dekw [2009-11-12 00:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Yes, yes, yes, I get it, Barbie. :3 And no, I'm not trying. Why would I want to spend two hours putting together a thousand-word review that you'll easily scoff off? Hmm?
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dekw In reply to IkazuchiRyu [2009-11-12 00:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Hey, an adapted nickname.
I said criticism (and non-formal), as opposed to review. I said such a thing because I was relatively sure you wouldn't, nor would you have reason to.
Granted, I don't think most were that long. Some were, with quoted parts (for fixing), but um,
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