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Published: 2008-12-17 22:07:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description DON'T PAY ATTENTION TO THE GUY SITTING ON HER HEAD. HE IS NOT PART OF PICTURE.
he was drawn before the big one was, got in the way. :c



anyways, these are two new characters of mine that i'm writing my new novel on. just a hobby thing. maybe i'll even draw Jane from EATING SLUGS(c), i haven't drawn her lately.
she makes a cameo in this story too, lollackofimagination.

so, the guy's name is ?ben and the girl's name is mary. mary is a highschooler that is all prissy and stuck up and in the beginning she's kinda fat and prudish and ugly. anyways, she gets told off by jane at lunch and suddenly realizes that she really is nothing to the word and goes all depressed and antisocial. then she meets homeless ?ben, who is an obsessive heroin addict. "i'm a good guy.. i just do bad things" is his like character-quote and he really is a nice guy, so mary takes pity on him because she's aching for a friend. but then things happen to where mary slowly becomes absorbed into ?ben's drug lifestyle and in the end she faces her doom at the tip of a needle. and ?ben's all omfg y did i bring u into dis? i am bad person after all crycrycryemo.

crazy stuff etc.

(c)plz
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Comments: 7

pirategirl666 [2008-12-18 21:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Kinda sounds like the plot to "Candy" with Heath Ledger. Which is an awesome movie. And I think your characters and writing will make the story even more amazing.

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DetoxSun In reply to pirategirl666 [2008-12-18 22:28:09 +0000 UTC]

I've never seen that movie. I'll have to rent it or something. Thanks!

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pirategirl666 In reply to DetoxSun [2008-12-19 06:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's amazing. But so tragic since Heath died of a drug overdose. But still, it's amazing.

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Jenestones [2008-12-18 16:55:30 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome...

SO awesome.


You know... you can always slap a pair of horns on the little dude and 'retend' it's her bad conscience.

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DetoxSun In reply to Jenestones [2008-12-18 22:28:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah, that'd work.


except in the pic/story she's supposed to be dead... LOL. forgot to add that

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Jenestones In reply to DetoxSun [2008-12-19 03:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh!
Still. Awesome.

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DetoxSun In reply to Jenestones [2008-12-19 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]

<3

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