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character done for Patrons ! style would be very inspired by sakimichancommissioned by OrganoidZero
RWBY OC : Neela Xiao Long
She is the adopted daughter of Yang and Blake. She is a Hawk Faunus, her faunus feature is her eyes
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Comments: 31
The upper half could use some more detail. Especially the hood and the background. Also I can't quite tell what her left arm is doing, is she pulling down her hood? Lastly, as I look closer at them it seems like the eyes are just slightly farther apart then they should be.
Besides those this artwork is pretty good. The shading is great, the frame is great and everything is pretty good.
Well the system needs me to write more words before I can submit this so this last section is purely to cheat the critique system. word word word
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Her hand is behind her hood to grab a arrow from her quiver.
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This is marvelously done. I'm critiquing not on your ability to imitate Sakimichan, but on the artwork alone. With that said, I personally think this is much better than your other pieces because there is a lot "life" in this picture compared to your other ones. I usually said that in picture that just had a blank background that they felt empty, but with this one, while the background isn't like a bustling city or anything, there is much more "activity" and makes it seem like it's a snapshot of life in motion, rather than a pose. Technically well executed (great with the focus), i had a design concern with the bow but i can't fault you on that. Overall, this is REALLY well done.
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Nice work on the character concept and colouring! I love the costume and weapon design, and I like the resemblance to Sakimichan yet retaining your own unique art style.
Just curious, how much do you charge for a commission like this?
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usually around 30-40 pounds
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Thanks. I am seriously thinking about commissioning a RWBY OC from you. Your artwork is amazing!
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I love this ... my ONLY nitpick is that the forearm looks rather long and not quite close enough compared to the implied perspective / blur.
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Awesome motion and the coloring is very detailed and smooth. Awesome 
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It's funny that you say inspired by sakimi chan. The details on your drawing are much more refined than most of her stuff. The composition is very much like her style though. Great work!
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What sort of arrows are involved? I'm a little surprised by the posing of the right hand.
I love the lighting, and the outfit, and the symbol on the bow.
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OrganoidZero came up with her. The quiver is similar to Raven's Sheath. She uses the touch pad on her left forearm to select what Dust the arrow is covered in when she withdraws it. (I'm a friend of Organoid lol)
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Yes yes he is. He is my writing partner for fanfics. The symbol on her sight is her huntress emblem
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Thank you so much for drawing Neela Xiao Long for me I have wanted to have a RWBY OC made by you ever since I first saw your art and you did not disappoint!!
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You should give us details about Neela. What's her backstory?
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Neela Jaeger(becomes a Xiao Long) is a hawk Faunus (Hawk eyes) She is the main character from a a slightly AU RWBY fan fic me and a friend are currently writing. She is 17 in pic, but she is 6 years old in time of her back story. She is the daughter of two White Fang members. The White Fang camp she lives at is found by the Atlas army and is invaded. In the chaos her parent's are murder and she barely makes it out. She blasted into a building from the shock wave of an explosion. She wakes up in the severely damaged building the next morning. She is badly injured and can barely breath for it being winter at the time. She then hears voices of Yang and Blake(Who are a couple and married at this point.) She barely get's their attention and they spot her in the building that is barely staying together. Blake crawls in to try and get her out. when she moves on through the window to get her the wall starts to collapse and yang moves into keep in up but is really struggling. Neela is terrified by both of them cause she thinks they are human but while Blake is talking to her she takes off her bow to calm her down it works but she is still nto wanting to go because of Yang. Yang give her a heart felt speech about everyone faunus or not deserves to be loved and treated the same. Neela finally feel safe enough and jumps into Blake's arms and they just make it out. They have her live with them while they try to find someone to adopt her. But after six months of no luck and eventually not looking as hard cause they start to love having her around they adopt her. that is the main part of it. there is a alot more but like i said that will be in the fan fic. Once it is ready to post I will have the info on my page.
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So i know it has been forever since i last posted this but, we are finally starting to upload the story that she stars in lol. www.fanfiction.net/s/12721767/… archiveofourown.org/works/1269…
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