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Published: 2017-08-13 16:55:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 258; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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A new OC I decided to make. She is this powerful mermaid sorceress with the ability to summon lightning of pure magical energi. Still needs a name.Related content
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Aww thanks! ^^
The design is rather simple though.
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Wait...a mermaid that shoots lightning?
Because Electric Eel logic?
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Kinda inspired of that. Though said lightning is more magic than actual lightning.
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In other words, it's magic, I don't have to explain it!
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Not quite like that. Her lightning is magical energy she is able to discharge in a shape much like lightning, but it isn't actually lightning.
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Of course. In other words, like Indumati's magical energy bats that are not actually bats!
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Yeah, much the same.
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Lol, of course.
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Lightning... mermaid. Mermaids live underwater. Lightning + water... hmmm... sounds dangerous.Β
Pretty cool character, though. Although, I think I have to agree with Hoshiko. Her torso seems odd. Her rib cage looks too long and her hips look to narrow in comparison to her chest. I'd suggest you compress her torso in terms of height, and make the hips slightly wider. But her face, hair, and tail look really good.
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DAMNED TO LONG TORSO! I'LL GET TO NOT DRAW YOU ONE DAY!
But thanks for the feedback.
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Woooww looks cool! I wonder what the color of her skin is xD and the fins.
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Well I was thinking some very dark blue for the tail and fins, and some beautiful pearly white skin. Does that sound good? ^^
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Woooow that sounds lovely <3333
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Just what I thought! Also giving her some glowing blue bits.
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Glooowwsss owo please do
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Glowing bits are cool! ^w^
Really need to finish her digital lineart.
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Also, she needs a name.
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Thank you friend! ^^
Still working on the digital version.
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Thanks a ton! ^w^
Won't be the last you see of her.
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you are very welcome
OHHH
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Glad you think so! ^w^
Really happy with her myself. The digital version should be coming soon.
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my pleasure! Β 
that's a good news! :3
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Thank you friend! ^w^
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Awesome design! I would say, the anatomy is slightly off/unnatural around the torso and breasts areas (unless you were going for that look) other than that! Awesome!
And for a name....how about Esmeralda?
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Well could you be more specific about what is off, so I might work around it in the future?
And no, Esmaralda sounds too "human".
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For example, the breasts seem way too large for a being of her build (unless you were going for that look) but the area underneath the breasts such as the ribs look a bit disproportionate to both her breasts and arms.
And for a name, how about Nacreanee (Nay-Cree-Ahn) (from the word Nacre, which means pearl)
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Well I understand, though it's more of an artstyle thing than anything, and as such I see no need to do anything abnout it.
Also, not sure about the name, it fits, but the spelling and pronounciation seems completely different to me. And that confuses me.
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But the rip cage looks rather disproportionate to the arms and breasts. Since she is a mythical creature, I guess it makes sense that she has large breasts compared to her body, good thing she isn't human though, I would go off xD
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Well I might be able to improve upon the "issue" in the future, but I shan't make any promisses (mainly because I still don't get 100% how it is wrong)
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It's just where the the lines are connecting from the ripcage and how thin the arm is
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Well I might do something about it in future pictures, but not now.
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Ahh, thank you! ^^
Really happy with her.
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Thats an awesome design amazing job on the oc madame^^.
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Thanks! I'm really happy with it my self ^w^
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Thanks! ^w^
Will make a colored digital version soon.
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Thanks a ton! ^^
I am really happy with her.
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Great job! How long is she supposed to be?
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