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Published: 2008-04-17 22:41:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 861; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description i've been working on this forever (or rather i started forever ago, left it alone for half a lifetime, and have been working on it lately) and i need help.

any adivce/feedback/etc. is great, although I prefer to be from a conceptual standpoint. I don't feel that it is missing a thing, but think that others might. I'm not looking for technical critique, as i am happy with it there (there are flaws, however, that are to be worked on).

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magesblood [2008-10-17 22:19:53 +0000 UTC]

you really set the bar high for manipulations. excellent works!

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velouria09 [2008-04-18 19:55:18 +0000 UTC]

stunning!

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vcrimson [2008-04-18 11:14:41 +0000 UTC]

this is really pretty mady...i don't know what i would suggest conceptually, because i like the concept already....although i might think that it does seem to be missing something...just something small perhaps...something hanging on the wall maybe?? but maybe not....i do like it as it is...

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Elora-Danen [2008-04-18 00:06:46 +0000 UTC]

my dear Mady, your work continues to amaze and astound. you've grown so much as an artist over the past year or so. i'm convinced you're going to change the world. well, you've changed mine anyway.

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lethe-gray [2008-04-18 00:05:44 +0000 UTC]

I think it's lovely, I don't know what more you'd want to do with it, though her skirt is a bit bright compared to the grainy-softness of the wallpaper.

Perhaps adding something red, though that's just me, and obviously it would change what the focus of the image is about. Heck - perhaps a very subtle image *behind* the wallpaper, visible only through the light or dark stripes. Though that's probably more trouble than it's worth

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DoNotAttempt In reply to lethe-gray [2008-04-20 03:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

Darkening up the skirt a bit is really good idea. I was actually thinking of adding a goldfish. I had one in there for a while, but couldn't agree with myself on size/placement.

With the image behind the stripes - again, a very good idea (plus, it wouldn't be hard to do). Perhaps not for this image, but do you mind if I use this for a different image sometime?

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lethe-gray In reply to DoNotAttempt [2008-04-20 03:30:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind at all, after all I stole the thought from recalling Styx's album cover hehehe

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