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Published: 2009-08-27 14:51:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description What is life?
Is it survival?
Is it really living?

Is life love?
Is it hate?
What is life?

Are we destined?
Do we choose?
Are we pawns?
Or are we in control?
What is life?

Is life what we make it?
Is life mapped out for us?
Does anyone ever truly know?
What life is!
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Comments: 11

Shinnk [2009-08-28 16:48:16 +0000 UTC]

oh, you made this question into a great poem!!
and who knows? at least not me^-^;

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doodler89 In reply to Shinnk [2009-08-28 17:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Shinnk In reply to doodler89 [2009-08-28 17:48:07 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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jayemjee [2009-08-27 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! Ooh! I know!

My answers to those questions would be mainly religious.

That aside, I like it. You ask the tough questions, and you have an interesting meter scheme, whether it was intentional or not.

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doodler89 In reply to jayemjee [2009-08-28 14:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you That really means alot, I haven't really written much poetry before, maybe one or two others in the past, but that's about it!

Err, what's a meter scheme?

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jayemjee In reply to doodler89 [2009-08-28 17:23:25 +0000 UTC]

The the number of syllables in each line of the poem. Normally, even poems that don't rhyme will still follow some kind of meter scheme.

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doodler89 In reply to jayemjee [2009-08-28 17:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay, I see

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jesusroxgirl [2009-08-27 18:07:12 +0000 UTC]

very nice i love the line about being a pawn

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doodler89 In reply to jesusroxgirl [2009-08-28 14:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I just feel that way sometimes you know?

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jesusroxgirl In reply to doodler89 [2009-08-28 20:57:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah, totally know what you mean

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doodler89 In reply to jesusroxgirl [2009-08-29 15:09:42 +0000 UTC]

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