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DBC67 [2017-01-18 14:30:42 +0000 UTC]
Just had a thought. What happened to Bewitcher after the explosions in the basement? Will she make an appearance? Will there be a flash back? Or is this a fill in the blank on the part of the reader?
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DPRagan In reply to DBC67 [2017-01-18 17:42:29 +0000 UTC]
She survived.
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DBC67 [2016-11-30 19:05:34 +0000 UTC]
Now this is a story I wish the rest were like. Instead of just transforming body, mind, and soul so that the girl takes over where the boy once was, you wrote the story where the boy will need to learn to live as a girl and make all the adjustments necessary to do so. Alexa's emotional breakdown was the inevitable realization of that reality coming home to roust. It gives a foundation on which to build and adds depth to the people in the story, and the story itself. Good job, now I must read on.
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DPRagan In reply to DBC67 [2016-11-30 23:10:00 +0000 UTC]
Will have to finish it sometime just got stuck at the fight scene.
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678091 [2015-08-20 06:06:36 +0000 UTC]
I read the chapters backwards to make it more enjoyable, but this one was sad
P.S. Barbara is a b....!!!
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Soldatoflife [2011-12-05 17:25:00 +0000 UTC]
I'd read this all day long if I could!!! One word: enthralling!
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DPRagan In reply to Soldatoflife [2011-12-05 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I hope some of the other things I have in mind pan out as well.
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DolphinSilverwolf [2011-09-20 03:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Looking at the picture, I'd almost think that she was a he before opening the locker. Another booby trap?
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manganut [2011-09-19 01:28:52 +0000 UTC]
this story sounds like some thing form city of heros/villans
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DPRagan In reply to manganut [2011-09-19 02:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Still it might be a case more of Blessed with Suck the true superhero'ing
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Uncle-Ben [2011-09-17 21:02:34 +0000 UTC]
YaY! You finished the WiP!
Thank you, Thank you, thank you.
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DPRagan In reply to Rogue7 [2011-09-17 10:23:52 +0000 UTC]
I think she just might at that.
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DPRagan In reply to axan312 [2011-09-17 05:14:35 +0000 UTC]
Observed the master Diane! (Current Writer for Ayla "Phase" Goodkind and Anna "Aquerna" Parsons)
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axan312 In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-17 05:26:06 +0000 UTC]
yes, Diane is a astonishing writer (and I think it a too weak word, and WU got other nice writer too) I had to step temporary away from the cannon story side of Watherley academy to be able to study ... stories there grab all my attention for too long reading 200+ page in 2 days in a foreign language not good for study(or eating habit...)
well only one month left and I'll won't have much to study anymore(intensive term/semester ... hell but fast) and be able to read them in my free times ( only made it up to combat final or so ,trying to follow in world chronology at least at the academy)
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dark-lotus-tg [2011-09-17 03:40:52 +0000 UTC]
Really like this. Both the image and the story. An intriguing new character (and with such a lovely, wistful expression in the picture).
Looking forward to hearing more of her story
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Hidden-Traveler [2011-09-17 03:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Dang.... I hope you do more. And I wish i could give Alexa a hug of support.
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A-Eadie [2011-09-17 02:25:16 +0000 UTC]
Glad to see this! Can't wait for more.
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A-Eadie In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-17 02:56:44 +0000 UTC]
Yup, saw it there too.
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CyberExedra [2011-09-16 23:19:20 +0000 UTC]
how exaclty did alex become alexa i know it has somthing to do with the suit and the lock of hair from the magic girl but from their im not sure
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DPRagan In reply to CyberExedra [2011-09-16 23:45:35 +0000 UTC]
That will be explored in future episodes. Lets just say it's a magic Accident for now.
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WickedPrince In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-20 01:23:34 +0000 UTC]
Nothing I feel brave enough to post.
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Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-16 20:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... she's gonna but hurting for a while.
Though it is odd that she's so certain she's stuck liek that when they still haven't entirely worked out what happened, I'd have thought there would be some glimmer of hope.
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-16 20:56:47 +0000 UTC]
Hrm... crushing that hope later on with some absolute revelation?
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