Kara-Yami [2018-09-02 16:13:40 +0000 UTC]
First of all, this Is super cute! The backgrounds for each section is on point! I love the vibrancy as well. I do wish that the sections were a bit more even. It seems like Poplio and Litten are huge (In sections) while roulette is in this little corner. Starting with Litten, the only think I can see that is noticeable. Is that the right eye is a bit of a lazy eye. Poplio seems a little awkward, mostly just in the face area. Rowlett (who is my favorite Alola starter) Looks really good. I actually think he Is your best for both pokemon, and for background. (not just because he's my favorite 😉) I was going to mention that I really like how you didnt make it a perfect line separating the sections. But I also think the line connecting the water and fire (the little purple area) is a bit distracting. In terms of improvement, compared to your last is exquisite!! Jut like I have been seeing from you, I'm very impressed about the level of improvement.
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