motoneko6 [2012-01-19 21:54:24 +0000 UTC]
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my lord! this is absolutely stunning! the mixture of the poem and the drawing is excellently crafted.
i love the hybrid (or furry), the mixture of the reptilian tail/wings, the human hair, and the wolf-like structure flows together in a smooth fashion.
try to work on your outlining. a thinner marker would do. also, the legs need some perspective, i can't see the second hind leg behind the first one, and this creature is in a crawling position.
for the wounds on the face, knees, and paws, try using the brighter shade of red that you used for the back injury, it seems to fit more perfectly, and makes it look like the creature is suffering more.
i love this deviantation! keep up the excellent work!
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birthdaygurl08 [2012-01-10 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Omg... i felt this way from my "depression problem" and felt of ending it all. I made my mother cry and she was upset, then i got medicine and i got better. U need to keep moving foward... I care about u
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