Comments: 18
CobraToon [2017-12-24 23:45:37 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Merry Crit-mas from the Samurai Snowmen!
Vision: I really like the strong idea in this piece of someone presenting a fossil in a museum in the world of Pokemon, from the other piece on the left, to the info-graphic on the right, to the very archaeologist-looking woman presenting the piece with her cute Omanyte sidekick.
Originality: The overall image and idea do feel fresh. Unfortunately almost nothing within the piece feels original. The Pokemon look like stock images, the fossil has the same basic stance I've seen before and could have been copied from elsewhere. The woman looks original but her clothes are chosen to make her a stereotypical archaeologist.
Technique: The artwork's skill seems expert; good lines, good color, good framing. However I have two very small issues. First, when I look closer the wings look wrong; the left has a bone protrusion going with the wing, while the right wing's protrusion goes away from the wing. Second, I don't know whether the Aerodactyl is an actual chunk of stone attached to the wall or a large photo taken from the dig site. The straight-line square frame makes it look like a photo and there's nothing to hold a stone to the wall, but I also can't see a museum proudly displaying such a large photo when the chunk of stone would be better.
Impact: The piece is strongly focused around the central image, which provides a great impact. I don't get any clear emotion from the piece (except for pride from the woman presenter) though museums aren't often a place for high emotion so it fits.
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CobraToon In reply to drake-rex [2018-01-07 20:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Merry Christmas and a happy New Year! You are very welcome. Honestly I should have given a higher score for Originality, I had just started Critmas and didn't have a tempered metric for deciding a score; at this point I would probably say more like 3 or 3.5 stars. And Originality is a pretty difficult one to decide.
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Mel1to21 [2017-12-24 23:48:25 +0000 UTC]
Hey look its jesus pokemon
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drake-rex In reply to Mel1to21 [2017-12-27 20:09:09 +0000 UTC]
All hail lord Helix!
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drake-rex In reply to Pauly-chan [2017-12-27 20:10:44 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, gracias hermosa, tu regalo también te quedó hermoso XD
Gracias, ese esqueleto llevó mucho trabajo ^^
Es que es un amor ;w;
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Pauly-chan In reply to drake-rex [2017-12-28 02:19:57 +0000 UTC]
lo se esta hermoso
omanake es mi fosil favorito
por ser tan lindo XD
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blue-sky-girl [2017-12-24 23:09:37 +0000 UTC]
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no se que decir
es tan hermosooosososo
lloro de la emocion
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lo amoooo
y ahora un colapso
en serio que te quedo DIVINO
graciassss
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reina-liuba [2017-12-24 21:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Te quedo muy bonito hermano nwn
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