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Published: 2005-08-29 08:01:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 199; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Feeling the smoothness of your skin
As you positioned to lean
Your arms around in an embrace
As I melted under your gaze

In your eyes, I see reflection
I cried, there is no deception
My hands, holding yours
As everything else blurs

Pulling you close to me
Sensing heat in your body
The beating of the hearts increased
I hope this moment never ceased

Gently caressing your head
Losing you, I'd dread
Then I smelled your hair
Filling me with so much care

I touched your cheeks
And tried to kiss your lips
Then somehow, you pushed away
Telling you (I'm sorry), it is okay

Minutes, maybe hours have passed
Knowing, it would not last
Lost in this paradise
As my body electrifies

I placed my head on your shoulders
Finding unexplainable pleasures
Listening to your breathing
Waiting for nothing and something

You, gently stroking my head
From the tip to the end
Thinking of you, I closed my eyes
As I started dreaming of the skies

Moving closer to your ear
My words you should hear
Closely, still holding you
Telling you, I love you
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Comments: 7

EostreMayhem [2005-08-29 13:31:16 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing...

It really makes me feel...just...so amazing.

All of what was in that poem...the heart beating faster...thinking it'll be forever...it happened to me...It made me realise, that the girl I loved, really loved me too...though now she's left...

This is being added to my favourites, it's just gobsmackingly brilliant.

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DreamWake In reply to EostreMayhem [2005-08-30 00:35:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you really understand it. But were both on the same page because the truth is she also left me.....

But at that time, I know I was in heaven.....

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maskedviolence [2005-08-29 09:24:55 +0000 UTC]

cool and mushy hehehehehe
is it the event that i think it is? hehe

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DreamWake In reply to maskedviolence [2005-08-30 00:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Yup, it is. I took me a while to realize that it was worth posting it. No more bitterness in me anyway.

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DarkestLove [2005-08-29 08:04:48 +0000 UTC]

brilliant

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DreamWake In reply to DarkestLove [2005-08-29 08:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comments and your appreciation!!!!!

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DarkestLove In reply to DreamWake [2005-08-29 08:18:34 +0000 UTC]

check me out sometime and no probs!

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