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Published: 2003-06-17 06:19:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description There are cars I know beneath bridges
I have pushed them into the river
A sad parade of semi-sunken pride rusting
Leaving red streaks across the water
Rivers running through twisting cities
I have constructed from memory with
Labyrinth houses pulled from history
I walked outside into garage parties
That were wakes for black clad mourners
Clutching at heat with frozen fingers
I cling to walls like moss across cracked walls
I have compressed against the chill
A pile of cars sit in the mouth of the bay
But they never seem to fill it
A stray will wonder here and there; still
We all find our way to the sea in time
This city grows like moss in remembered corners
Expanding in a lost warehouse memory
That I drive through looking for the lost things
Leaving the dead cars beneath bridges
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Comments: 3

oh-great-smeg [2005-11-01 12:07:24 +0000 UTC]

you must have some strange dreams lol...i like it though

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echo-si [2003-07-06 02:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I very much like how you brought the piece back around, and how all of the elements connect with out completely making sense. The opening line is quite a grabber--it really caught my attention for some reason.

Nice work ^_^

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davezatch [2003-06-17 06:23:31 +0000 UTC]

"There are cars I know beneath bridges"

powerful, i like it

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