echo-si [2003-07-06 02:23:25 +0000 UTC]
I very much like how you brought the piece back around, and how all of the elements connect with out completely making sense. The opening line is quite a grabber--it really caught my attention for some reason.
Nice work ^_^
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davezatch [2003-06-17 06:23:31 +0000 UTC]
"There are cars I know beneath bridges"
powerful, i like it
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