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Published: 2003-12-26 07:54:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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Description
The past is the presentand the future is the past
while time plays it's apathetic game
golems dance amongst the sands
permanently in search of fame
Dreams flutter across the winds
and others wet their wings
losing their ability to fly
causing some to wish
That they might die
And through all this
the spectrum of colors
always bares the pain
losing it's grip,
not knowing what it gains
Amused masticores prance
through jungle's trees
And continue to search for them.
The joyous golems, dieing dreams, and screaming spectrums
for that's who it chose to devour,
in the hour glass.
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Comments: 2
It creates interesting surface imagery, but I suppose a deeper meaning could be found. Many things could be taken from it, but it begs the question of what you were thinking when you wrote it, or if it was all just surface imagery alone.
Bravo.
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*perks an eye brow* goodness...it's very cryptic and seems to speed up like it's being timed..counting down to something but then just ends like no one's supposed to know..*hour glass, no duh* this one is nicely worded and is chosen carefully in its meaning, good job ^.^
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