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Published: 2017-10-09 05:58:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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I lost my pale-green colour pencil and used one from another brand instead...I can see some really amazing entries and I hope mine is okay...
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Hello! <3 I'm going to give this one a critique; I hope I can be of help c':
To start off, like with your other drawings, I just love the colours. You're absolutely amazing at colouring; and though the shading is a bit simplistic, it works very well with your style. Like was said by Uxie, everything looks so smooth and elegant.
I also love the sense of movement in this piece. I admire how you can draw so many different poses without compromising the anatomy unusually, which is what happens to me a lot. The details are also splended and the different colours work very well together.
Some little issues I've noticed: Though I love how you shade hair in general, I feel like it could do with a little more shading. This may be more of my personal opinion, and really nothing is wrong with how you draw it, but I feel it could add to your style. Maybe try adding a few more strands to the hair? Try going with at least 5 tones, some darker and some lighter. I do, however, love how you've highlighted her hair.
The anatomy is pretty solid, but a trouble area is the shoulders. Where the arms connect to the shoulders looks a little thin, particularly on the left (her right) side. Her head is also a tad big.
Adding a few more folds to the clothing may also improve it, though you have a great start with that. You may also be going for a simpler look.
In any case, this is an amazing and beautiful piece~ Keep up the amazing work, and good luck on your artistic journey! Ā
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This is really well done! c:
Everything looks super clean and smooth~
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Thank you~
(I am not sure what it means to be super clean and smooth >_<)
So the lines are straight and not messy? Does the paper texture look smooth?
I did use regular printer paper and the colours did apply smoothly.
Your feedback is appreciated and I wish you a very lovely day Ā
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you're welcome!Ā Ā
I meant that the lines aren't messy~ Now that you mention it the coloring/texture does look very smooth as well!
I hope you have a lovely day as well!
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Oh. This is lovely ;_;
It is really cheery and colorful. I also think the anatomy is very successful too and I love the details, especially flowers.
Outlines are neat and colors match each other. It resembles summer or spring.Ā
And by the way, you're really good at coloring with pencils.Ā Ā Ā
(IĀ accidentally sent this at first so I just edited it)Ā
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