thatgirlcaitlin [2006-11-02 21:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice story. It kept my interest all the way through which is actually hard to do... I lose interest very quickly usually. I like how you italicized your thoughts. I find that to be a cool technique of writing. It's like two different stories are going on at once, an outer story and an inner monologue. Nice job.
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Einos In reply to thatgirlcaitlin [2006-11-03 15:54:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you! yea, that italicizing is something that some people use... apparently for a reason... but thanks for the hint. i think i'll keep using it in future stories!
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Fengari [2006-09-20 15:13:37 +0000 UTC]
heh..you were lucky! I also am,because here there's no problem with under-aged people
Einos In reply to Fengari [2006-09-20 17:01:25 +0000 UTC]
heh! well, as my brothers girlfriend said... "no way in hell he's getting in"! yet, i did! w00t! lucky bastard! yet, most often i screw up in a game of poker, REAL bad... luck seems to allways be on my side when it's about the real deal...
Fengari In reply to Einos [2006-09-21 10:03:38 +0000 UTC]
so how did you manage to un-screw in the game of poker?
Einos In reply to Fengari [2006-09-23 15:32:30 +0000 UTC]
to un-screw the game of poker? well... sometimes it helps a lot with an ace up your sleeve! nah, i don't cheat! buuut one game can change it all! in 2 days i lost about 20 euros (about 20 US$)... took a couple of days off, and the next time i played, i won about 15 bucks again! w00t! .......yet, it's nothing compared to my lil bro..... lost 30 bucks in half an hour... DOH!