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Electric-Empire — Battle To The Death[Redone]

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Published: 2015-07-29 03:58:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 527; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 4
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Description Lol, the background is terrible. slay me
Ahhg, at least it's better than what I used to do.

Oh, and if the you're wondering why both have pointed ears, well, I got thinking: Both Erika and Kyle are Pyrosen. And 90% of PyreFrost's population[unless you're from another planet] has pointed ears. [Marcus was full Pyrosen, and he used his own DNA when he created these two]. Since both are natives, I thought it would be really weird if they had normal human ears. XD It didn't hit me until a few days ago.

ANYWAYS, This is a remake of a drawing I did back in May 2014.

I really didn't realize how much I had improved in just a year. But I still suck at background, lolol
Redrawing old art really helps get your spirits up when you're feeling like your art isn't good enough. :3
[And yes, I changed Erika's hair style a bit, the other style just wasn't workin' for her.]
And you probably noticed the way I drew the hair in this picture, and I really like it. I think I'm going to attempt to start using it more frequently. It gives it a nice look. n_n

Um.. So I'd probably go on and explain more useless trash, but it's late.
I'll do the before and after meme tomorrow, hopefully.

So yea! Feedback is appreciated ~ Let me know how I'm doing. c:

Both characters and places © Venomari19
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Comments: 15

scotsbane [2015-07-30 13:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Alright, so first off: that improvement!! Literally every aspect of your work has drastically improved! But what I noticed right off the bat were the expressions of Erika and Kyle. This creates the whole mood of the piece. Intense. What else attributes to the intensity that lacks in the original is the surrounding area. The fire and scenery just makes the whole thing so much more epic!
Next thing I wanted to mention was the improvement in details. The wrinkles in the clothes, to each strand of the hair, to the stars in the background. This all makes the piece really stand out and look awesome.
You have really improved a ton!! And I look forward to more stuff from you. c:

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JustAveiwer907 [2015-07-29 15:38:34 +0000 UTC]

nice improvement  ! but watch those light-sabers, Erika's saber is one the side where it would cut Kye (but if that's what you meant sorry for the comment) , other than that it looks great!!  

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Electric-Empire In reply to JustAveiwer907 [2015-07-29 21:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

And oh my gosh, I didn't even notice. xD It's supposed to be on the other side, I used the wrong layers- crap. Thanks for pointing that out to me!

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JustAveiwer907 In reply to Electric-Empire [2015-07-29 21:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Np

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DoodleDerp-64 [2015-07-29 05:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome!! ^^

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Electric-Empire In reply to DoodleDerp-64 [2015-07-29 21:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BloodyRoseGhoul37 [2015-07-29 04:20:05 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing! And I suck at drawing on computers and sometimes occasionally my pencil and hand will disagree. Anyway this is brilliant, the colors, shading, positions, and the background looks great... Great piece my friend... Bravo *claps* ^^

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Electric-Empire In reply to BloodyRoseGhoul37 [2015-07-29 21:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!
No worries, the same happens to me. It's stressful being an artist. xD
And thanks again, I tried ;v;

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BloodyRoseGhoul37 In reply to Electric-Empire [2015-07-29 21:51:52 +0000 UTC]

I can tell and you're most welcome^^

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SychoET [2015-07-29 04:10:26 +0000 UTC]

So much improvement it's painful!
I can see the huge change and difference in it, along with shading, coloring and background wise.

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Electric-Empire In reply to SychoET [2015-07-29 21:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Gaah, thanks so much!
And I still didn't do that great on the background, but it is a lot better than how I used to do xD

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SychoET In reply to Electric-Empire [2015-07-30 18:18:12 +0000 UTC]

NP buddy ^^
Still better with backgrounds then me man X'D

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snowyroxx22 [2015-07-29 04:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Lol don't worry about the background, it looks amazing! Trust me, I'm WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY worse!

Anyways, this looks amazing! The detail, the shading, the characters, they all are AWESOME! And that improvement is really outstanding! Great work!

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Electric-Empire In reply to snowyroxx22 [2015-07-29 21:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, but I think you'd do a nice job. c:

Thanks so much! I spent over 6 hours, so I was hoping it paid off. xD

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snowyroxx22 In reply to Electric-Empire [2015-07-29 23:03:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Those hours did pay off!

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