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Published: 2016-07-12 18:49:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 2013; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 0
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This might suck, I don't know anymore.Updated with a new version.
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totally agreed! its gorgeous!
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"This might suck"
This is so pretty don't doubt yourself even if its a joke
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I see flame-brush or effect. It looks not relevant to the scene because too much red (darker color) in front of yello bird (lighter)
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Not sure what you mean?
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I mean smudgy and desaturated body and flames that not relevant to background and surroung situation without shining.
sta.sh/0q3ed96sqzv β faster to show than explain
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This any better?Β sta.sh/0y1k1ecw5zf
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Yes, looks much better and more glow from fire.
But look at these areas sta.sh/01lnotk1uqjw
There is red flames over yellow.
It cant be real just because when flame is weaker, colder and more red, it glows weaker than big yellow flame.
Make little research about flame. Look at the flame on paper in front of dark and bright background, in front of lamp or big flame, collect some photos with campfires in the dark
Flame almost as gas, it can`t block light:
cs6.pikabu.ru/post_img/2014/11β¦ β invisible shadow
s00.yaplakal.com/pics/pics_oriβ¦ β slightly visible shadow
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is this moving in the right direction?
sta.sh/03xlhfm6rl6
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Yes and no.
Yes: there is no fire overshading
No: you lost red (darker) details between flames and parts of body. Body becomes flatter.
Flames are reallyΒ good in birds neck and chest, where light is strong, but contrast with darker parts is still appears.
I recommend you to try with simple shape as sphere and few flames. And then transfer your expirience on the bird.
Something like this sta.sh/0z7v42wcepn
(rough quality, I am in hurry )
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It looks very cool to me, the flames all over the Phoenix body fits the atmosphere of destruction, great work.Β
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