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Published: 2010-05-13 11:50:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 231; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 12
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Description IMPERFECT_

ho sempre pensato che in questa foto il cigno fosse perfetto. e così anche il suo riflesso.
poi ho notato quei cerchi nell\'acqua.
perchè anche la perfezione sgocciola.

e la perfezione muore
quando ti accorgi
che effettivamente
era un riflesso
e scopri che
anche i cigni
in verità
sanno rovinare
la perfezione di un riflesso.
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Comments: 7

Silver-Guild [2010-05-16 10:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Very nice shot. I think the exposure on the swan is just right and there's also a nice bit of sharpness.

For critique I'd suggest cropping the shot to include just the swan and the reflection (as I think this would give it more impact). Another way of getting a bigger impact, (for when you're shooting) would be to try shooting from different perspectives e.g. get slightly closer to the ground so that you're at eye level with the swan. Just a couple of suggestions

In saying that, I really like the reflection, and the slight ripples in the water around the swan. Good work

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abhishek-mitra [2010-05-15 17:14:03 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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EliTheWalrus In reply to abhishek-mitra [2010-05-15 18:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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abhishek-mitra In reply to EliTheWalrus [2010-05-16 09:19:21 +0000 UTC]

anytime!

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Kamal-Q [2010-05-13 16:45:39 +0000 UTC]

you got the gradation in the water just right. Interesting composition with the swan lower than the silhouetted duck looking thing above it

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EliTheWalrus In reply to Kamal-Q [2010-05-14 12:41:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Kamal-Q In reply to EliTheWalrus [2010-05-14 13:14:54 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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