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***FULL VIEW TO READ--CLICK ON THE LINK BELOW TO READ PAGE TWO***This is another RSoM attempt, at which I failed to continue. I have a really bad habit of starting things and then never finishing them... like comics.
Sigh. It's called Distant End. If you are interested in hearing the rest of the plot, tell me. I toned and lettered this in Photoshop.Page Two
Distant End © ~ember-snow (A.K.A. Me)
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Yes. I like angels and devils. Mainly, it's because I like to draw wings, weird eyes, and cool clothes. XD Thank you!
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yes, yes you should pick the series up again sometime ^__^ BCB7wuz here *<=O) in case you don't know that is a clown =]
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LOL I CAN SEE DOWN HER SHIRT LOL
I like how you drew her in the last two panels. And how the speech bubble has a low opacity in the first panel. 8D
May I offer some critique?
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Thanks.
Sure, but I won't change anything. It'd be helpful for future references. Unless I'm just plain BAD at improving whatever you point out. xD
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In the panel where she is waving, it would make a bit more sense if she waved the other hand. Otherwise it could be a bit awkward for her arm. And...oh, wait. That's it. XD Yeah, i'd just suggest changing the hand. Always test positions to the best of your abilities before you draw them. 8D
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Oh, right. XD That would make more sense, wouldn't it?
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I was browsing for things that involved rsom and this came up. I thought, "I love the character designs >D< Who did these?" And it's like, you! XD
SMALL WORLD O:
So, yeah, I love these character designs :>
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Oh, you should really enter that. I don't think I'm good enough yet, but you are! 
Thanks!
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Oh, the people that win anything are much better than me >_<' I am going to enter though, for practice's sake~
I'm honored that you think I'm competition >D<
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Good luck! I hope you win!
That's 'cause you're really good.
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you stories are awesome, don't worry about dropping a few
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How many do I have now? One-hundred? xD;
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Don't worry about dropping projects. That's the only way we learn.
By the way, I think this is one of your best ideas. I'm very intrigued by how this would turn out, so I hope you invest some more time in it.
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I actually had some ideas about it--like crazy twists and freaky monsters, but I would never have the patience to get that far. D:
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You have to have a real commitment and desire to see the story through, that's for sure. But if you find that you don't have the patience to finish it, then that means it's not the right story yet. At least for me anyway. :3
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Yes, yes! That makes total sense!
But, I don't think I can come up with any better stories, heh heh.
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Nice. Love the detail, and that devil is so adorable ;____; ♥
I hope to see more of this though o: I read the second page, sounds very interesting so far. (:
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Thank you! Unfortunately, the more detail in the drawings, the earlier I quit. xD;
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welcomess~!
lolz ^_^
yes i now how u feel. i do the same thing~!
hahaha
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Hooray for slackers. xD;
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Aw, I really like Rena's design. You should continue this. So long as it doesn't interfer with your writing of Falling in Luck <3. I love her face in the last panel of page two.
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Thanks! I usually draw girls in skirts, so I decided to make Rena more tomboy-ish and wear capris. xD
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Each page takes so long though... xD I'll tell you if I decide to make more pages.
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k, but im a huge manga fan, i read any free stuff i can find! mostly web comics....
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I see. Do you have a Smack Jeeves account?
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Well, you should get one if you can. 
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Aw.. it's so cute! <33 I love the clothing on your characters-they're also so loli inspired! :'D
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Aw, poor her :[
I love all your character designs. :]
Don't worry about dropping a project or two. We're young... that's what we do. xD haha
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Thank you very much, sis!
Ha ha... that'd be bad if I dropped school projects... but I don't. XD
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You're welcome! : D
That would be! :0 Haha, you can never drop those! (Although I wish we could xD )
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That would be quite splendid, indeed. xD
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I love your comics
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Thank you!! I love yours too.
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