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Published: 2007-06-10 19:21:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1137; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 4
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I felt like drawing an anime.
Critiques are welcome!
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Comments: 33
Simple, clean and effective. There really is that look of pride in her eyes.
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Love the eyes, eye lashes, and the lips. Geez, this makes me want to draw...
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You did well. That lighlight on her chin might be a bit superfluos, but other than that, I can't think of anything to say against it
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I really love the coloring and the character design of this character ^^
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she's very cute, there's an edgyness about her that i just can't put my finger on
anyways my only piece of criticism is that her torso seems a bit to thin, but that may have been what you were going for.
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greata works.. I love expression and composition. nice colours and details!
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Took a look, read the other comments, and I must say I love it. Especially the nose, the turned up look is endearing and the detail in the jewelry is unique. However, the outturn of the spine should start higher. Only critique I see! Lovely work.
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I like it! A couple of things that could be improved on: the little black lineart divet on the nose could be taken out all together, as there is shading and highlights there anyways and it makes her nose look like there is a lump in it or something. Also, her back doesn't seem like it extends soon enough from her neck, which makes it look as though her back is concave at the shoulders where it should be rounded.
Hope that helps!
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thank you very much! As soon as I feel like retouching this piece (and I really feel like it after reading your very constructive comments 
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You're welcome! You're always so graceous about getting critiques, I always feel like I can help out with it. Also, I think it helps to get an outside perspective on things like this. I don't always know how my anatomy is, whether it needs work or not. It's hard to know when you've just done it for hours on end. :-D All together there's very little I would do to change it, those are just little things that I noticed.
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I totally agree with you; sometimes, I'm working on my laptop and then, after uploading my piece on deviantart, I check it with my boyfriend's computer (he has a larger screen but I can't also use it to draw my piece) and it changes totally the way I "thought" it looks like and the way it actually does look like!
Anyway, getting advise or second opinion from an outsider always helps us to "open" our eyes hehe
thanks again!
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Any time! Keep it up, your artwork is VERY good!
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very cool, kinda reminds me of a bandaid on her nose though xD
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hhe... Yeah, i'll maybe remove it
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LOL its just me don't worry I'm weird like that x3
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate it
In fact, I'm getting better and better (on my opinion) with my tablet (and my new laptop)... I'll try to upload more pieces of this kind
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of course you are getting better
You get used to paint with a tablet PLUS you get excersises
Looking forward
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